2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "haiku suite (dead leaves)"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
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Comment from Nosha17
Interesting imagery to convey the image of death, all three so different. Good use of metaphorical language and well chosen words, good luck in the contest. faye
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2015
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Interesting imagery to convey the image of death, all three so different. Good use of metaphorical language and well chosen words, good luck in the contest. faye
Comment Written 13-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2015
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thank you Faye :)
Comment from lancellot
Very nice three different ways of looking at death and the impacts of it, real or not.
note:
like dead bury upside down
- I would look at this line again, particularly the bury part.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2015
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Very nice three different ways of looking at death and the impacts of it, real or not.
note:
like dead bury upside down
- I would look at this line again, particularly the bury part.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2015
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I know, there should be a break but no punctuation is allowed :) Thank you
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, mystery writer, great imagery presented in the three separate haiku, but the last one is my favorite. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2015
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this is an excellent write, mystery writer, great imagery presented in the three separate haiku, but the last one is my favorite. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 13-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2015
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thank you sweetwoodjax :)