Imagination
5-7-5 poem22 total reviews
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Teresa - a clever 5/7/5 and a good entry for the contest. Very well thought out and I really like it. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2015
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Hi Teresa - a clever 5/7/5 and a good entry for the contest. Very well thought out and I really like it. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 04-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2015
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Thank you Dorothy:)
Comment from Linda Engel
Yes it is . I certainly have been inspired to spake my imagination the last few months thanks to our little group. Love the photo it is definitely Moon Willow's work.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2015
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Yes it is . I certainly have been inspired to spake my imagination the last few months thanks to our little group. Love the photo it is definitely Moon Willow's work.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2015
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Thank you Linda:)
Comment from lightink
I feel the imaginative beauty of this piece yet I am having trouble fully comprehending the meaning of it. I keep trying because it feels like I am missing out on something very important. It feels like a zen koan - a paradox that my mind overcomplicates... I am puzzled, drawn in and wanting more...
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2015
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I feel the imaginative beauty of this piece yet I am having trouble fully comprehending the meaning of it. I keep trying because it feels like I am missing out on something very important. It feels like a zen koan - a paradox that my mind overcomplicates... I am puzzled, drawn in and wanting more...
Comment Written 03-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2015
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It is kind of a zen meditative piece. It is meant to make one stop and ponder which it apparently has done for you :) so now I pat myself on the back:)
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I totally felt like in my meditations group: one hand clap - or something like that! You definitely achieved your goal!
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Teresa
_ Well, this is cleverly penned and presented.
_ Cook artwork---really complements your 5.7.5.
_ Great entry. Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2015
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Hi, Teresa
_ Well, this is cleverly penned and presented.
_ Cook artwork---really complements your 5.7.5.
_ Great entry. Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 03-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2015
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Thanks Jax!
Comment from Sasha
Excellent work with this. Perfect syllable count. I often find myself gazing out at the horizon when I go to the beach and watch the sunset. I know the world isn't flat but watching the sun slip from view always makes me wonder if for a brief moment in time, maybe it is. Terrific entry for this contest and I wish you all the best. Just love the artwork you chose for this one too.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2015
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Excellent work with this. Perfect syllable count. I often find myself gazing out at the horizon when I go to the beach and watch the sunset. I know the world isn't flat but watching the sun slip from view always makes me wonder if for a brief moment in time, maybe it is. Terrific entry for this contest and I wish you all the best. Just love the artwork you chose for this one too.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2015
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I love the sunsets of Mexico. Can't wait to go there again some day.
Thanks for the review. I couldn't believe my luck when I found this artwork to go with it.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello :)
Nice job with this 5/7/5 for the contest. Good job with the syllable count and the art work, it goes well with your poem. Well done!
gypsy
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2015
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Hello :)
Nice job with this 5/7/5 for the contest. Good job with the syllable count and the art work, it goes well with your poem. Well done!
gypsy
Comment Written 03-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2015
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Thanks so much:)
Comment from Spiritual Echo
Far be it for me to make suggestions when it comes to poetry, but honestly, I wanted to read... one horizon. Interpreting ONE instead of THE as the imagery of two people looking at the same thing and yet the person with imagination sees beyond the obvious. Don't pay attention to me--I know nothing about poetry,
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2015
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Far be it for me to make suggestions when it comes to poetry, but honestly, I wanted to read... one horizon. Interpreting ONE instead of THE as the imagery of two people looking at the same thing and yet the person with imagination sees beyond the obvious. Don't pay attention to me--I know nothing about poetry,
Comment Written 03-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2015
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I love your suggestion and I am going to change it. Thanks so much!
Comment from lancellot
You know, I like this interpretation of the human imagination. It is a form of inner vision that is slightly off reality and looks off into the unknown. Good on the count too. Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2015
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You know, I like this interpretation of the human imagination. It is a form of inner vision that is slightly off reality and looks off into the unknown. Good on the count too. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2015
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/thank you so much!
Comment from ravenblack
Such a unique description of imagination. Right now, I am sitting here, visualizing what that would be like, your vision parallel to the horizon, merging with it though not entirely clear, but knowing something will come, has to come. Truly, this is conceptually brilliant! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2015
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Such a unique description of imagination. Right now, I am sitting here, visualizing what that would be like, your vision parallel to the horizon, merging with it though not entirely clear, but knowing something will come, has to come. Truly, this is conceptually brilliant! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 03-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2015
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Exactly! thanks for the great review Ed.
Comment from Joan E.
What a fascinating juxtaposition of the vision and the horizon, plus imagination--the definition is memorable! The curious artwork is just the right compliment too. Best wishes with this strong entry- Joan
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2015
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What a fascinating juxtaposition of the vision and the horizon, plus imagination--the definition is memorable! The curious artwork is just the right compliment too. Best wishes with this strong entry- Joan
Comment Written 03-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2015
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Thank you Joan:)