Comment from mermaids

Excellent

This is a clever and creative poem, I can see all the bugs partying below the leaf. It is a happy sight. Bugs October fest is a perfect last line that fits the first two lines. Excellent haiku form.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015

thank you memaids :)

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Hugs....for bugs..

This is quite a mantle piece

I love the fall...it's a good season..

Well penned

God bless

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015

thank you kiwijenny :)

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Preparing the leaves for their Spring Debut. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015

thank you c lucas :)

reply by c_lucas on 08-Oct-2015

You're welcome,

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Haha...I love your subtle humor, Gypsy. I could picture all those tiny insects, hoisting their tiny beer steins high into the air (with multiple legs, of course), drinking their tiny bug beers...

Eloquent wording in your first line, nicely connected grammatically to your second. The syllabic count is on the money, and the color choices scream, FALL IS HERE!

Excellent haiku. Very well done.
~Dean :)

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015

Thank you my friend. I appreciate your detailed and awesome review. :)

reply by Dean Kuch on 08-Oct-2015

It's always my pleasure, Gypsy...
~Dean ;}

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

Excellent Nature Haiku! The author's words are creative,
descriptive and created a vision for the reader. The poem flows
and connects well. The poem's background color adds
attractiveness to this poem.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015

thank you harmony :)

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

:-)

bugs' October fest

wonderful evocation!

They are so busy, busy there
burrowing in - preparing
for winter's long sleep.
A final haves party - a festival
for celebration
before hibernation takes them :-)

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015

thank you leineco :)

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

This is both a good, correct and amusing haiku. You paint a picture of happy bugs having a ball. Good entry to the contest and I wish you good luck. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015

thank you Dorothy :)

Comment from Lena Borghi

Excellent

This is excellent. Looks to me like you've met all the requirements. The two grammatically connected lines give us two vivid concrete images in juxtaposition, as a good haiku should. Your satori line is very clever.

Good luck in the contest!

Best,
Lena

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015

thank you Lena :)

Comment from OnyxSapphire78

Excellent

What a great entry for the contest! I loved the image of the bugs living it up for their October fest! You just made my imagination run wild! :) Great haiku! Good luck and happy writing!

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015

thank you onyx :)

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent write, mystery writer, I love the satori line on this one, great imagery presented, just worried about you promoting it for more than the maximum 52 cents. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015

Hello, yes, I was not suppose to promote for more than 52 cents. I read it wrong and I thought it was minimum 52 cents. It will probably get disqualified, although, Domino, the writer that created this contest knows what happened and he didn't say it was disqualified. Oh well! I thank you for the awesome review. :)