Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 47 "You Went Away"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
26 total reviews
Comment from Eric1
Hi Brett, this is an excellent well written set of lyrics, a great story tolsd within as all good songs should have, it has a good melodic flow and rhythm and thewords rhyme beautifully.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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Hi Brett, this is an excellent well written set of lyrics, a great story tolsd within as all good songs should have, it has a good melodic flow and rhythm and thewords rhyme beautifully.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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You are welcome Brett.
Comment from Zue65
This is really the ultimate test of love, where a lover continues to love even if the beloved just went away. The art work complements well the message of the poem reinforcing the the visual image that can be drawn from the poem. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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This is really the ultimate test of love, where a lover continues to love even if the beloved just went away. The art work complements well the message of the poem reinforcing the the visual image that can be drawn from the poem. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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Comment from Tessa Kay
Too many people replace a broken relationship (just noticed the ship in relationship; maybe the reason for the picture?) with the bottle. Never a good idea.
Good job. :)
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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Too many people replace a broken relationship (just noticed the ship in relationship; maybe the reason for the picture?) with the bottle. Never a good idea.
Good job. :)
Comment Written 25-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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The ship illustrates her leaving. Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from MelB
Nice poem about the one who went away. He's still pining away, but she's long gone and not coming back. Nice flow to the poem. His anguish comes through, especially with drowning his sorrows in a bottle.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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Nice poem about the one who went away. He's still pining away, but she's long gone and not coming back. Nice flow to the poem. His anguish comes through, especially with drowning his sorrows in a bottle.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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Comment from Selina Stambi
I could sort of 'hear' a song in my head as I read, Brett.
I'm sure this could be set to music - country and western style? :)
Sonali
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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I could sort of 'hear' a song in my head as I read, Brett.
I'm sure this could be set to music - country and western style? :)
Sonali
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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Comment from MizKat
Hi Brett,
This was an interesting poem to read. You are so talented in writing all kinds of things. I always look forward to reading your work. This was great as usual.
Kat
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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Hi Brett,
This was an interesting poem to read. You are so talented in writing all kinds of things. I always look forward to reading your work. This was great as usual.
Kat
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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I like everything you write. Kat
Comment from Dean Kuch
Nah, I wasn't looking for any particular rhyme pattern, Brett. If it's evident, fine, if not, well, that's fine too.
Instead, I focused more on the words and what you were saying here more than anything else. And what you're saying here is that it really doesn't matter one iota about what other people think where matters of your heart are concerned.
You're the one who has to live with yourself, no one else...
Nicely done...
Always with respect
~Dean
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2015
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Nah, I wasn't looking for any particular rhyme pattern, Brett. If it's evident, fine, if not, well, that's fine too.
Instead, I focused more on the words and what you were saying here more than anything else. And what you're saying here is that it really doesn't matter one iota about what other people think where matters of your heart are concerned.
You're the one who has to live with yourself, no one else...
Nicely done...
Always with respect
~Dean
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2015
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Always appreciate your comments. Helps keep me interested in this site. Yes, I place more value in your reviews than any other member of this site. And, I agree. At least for me, it does not matter what anybody else says. It matters what you can live with. Have a wonderful day, my friend!
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It's my pleasure, Brett, and you do the same, my friend.
Always with respect
~Dean
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Wow the lyrics and absolutely wonderful
Nicely done and I caneven sing this one
It flows so easy and the words are perfect as a ballad would be.
Nicely done
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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Wow the lyrics and absolutely wonderful
Nicely done and I caneven sing this one
It flows so easy and the words are perfect as a ballad would be.
Nicely done
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Brett
_ Yep, many a bottle of whiskey has seen a body through a love gone wrong.
_ Just ask 'No show Jones'.
_ Good country song.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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Hi, Brett
_ Yep, many a bottle of whiskey has seen a body through a love gone wrong.
_ Just ask 'No show Jones'.
_ Good country song.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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Comment from Joyce Long
This is very well done. Thanks for sharing.
The end of a romance is very difficult to recover from--if it is ended because of a split-up or death. It is difficult to recover. "A broken down bar stool" isn't the answer. "I'm going to love you through you went away" says call that needs to be said.
I didn't find any errors or corrections to be made.
Joyce 10-22-15
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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This is very well done. Thanks for sharing.
The end of a romance is very difficult to recover from--if it is ended because of a split-up or death. It is difficult to recover. "A broken down bar stool" isn't the answer. "I'm going to love you through you went away" says call that needs to be said.
I didn't find any errors or corrections to be made.
Joyce 10-22-15
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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I enjoyed your poem. Joyce