haiku (silver icicle)
winter haiku12 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Excellent haiku with correct format and good presentation.
-I like the imagination in your poem very much.
-The imagery is very vivid.
-I can picture everything you describe, beginning with the "silver icicle".
-The verb "pierces" is a strong one and the descriptions that follow are vivid.
-Excellent satori line.
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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
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-Excellent haiku with correct format and good presentation.
-I like the imagination in your poem very much.
-The imagery is very vivid.
-I can picture everything you describe, beginning with the "silver icicle".
-The verb "pierces" is a strong one and the descriptions that follow are vivid.
-Excellent satori line.
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Comment Written 05-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
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Thank you for the excellent review
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Irish Goat
Great visualization, and the black and white font/background reality accounted this. Short, sweet and poignant. I could feel the chill, and see the glam of the knife. Very well done in so few words.
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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
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Great visualization, and the black and white font/background reality accounted this. Short, sweet and poignant. I could feel the chill, and see the glam of the knife. Very well done in so few words.
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Comment Written 05-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
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Thank you for the positive review