Short Form Poetry
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Comment from nordicgirl
A coommon sentiment, bur you have found the perfect words to express it. Man drools, oh my, is that ever the image that comes to mind. This has my vote.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2015
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A coommon sentiment, bur you have found the perfect words to express it. Man drools, oh my, is that ever the image that comes to mind. This has my vote.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2015
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Awesome. I'm so encouraged. Thank you kindly. :))
Comment from I am Cat
Well said, my dear (no pun intended) friend
Ok, maybe there was.
I know, sixes are valuable, but hell, I had to.
This photo is ridiculously painful to see...
Go win this
C
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2015
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Well said, my dear (no pun intended) friend
Ok, maybe there was.
I know, sixes are valuable, but hell, I had to.
This photo is ridiculously painful to see...
Go win this
C
Comment Written 15-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2015
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I've already won with your kind and witty words, my antelope. Hmmm, doesn't work with every animal does it.... :))
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LOL... well, I'll take what I can get ;)
Comment from AnnaLinda
Poet,
Well you have a very strong message that you
successfully conveyed within those few
syllables.
The use of "drools" is very effective.
Well done!
Linda
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2015
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Poet,
Well you have a very strong message that you
successfully conveyed within those few
syllables.
The use of "drools" is very effective.
Well done!
Linda
Comment Written 15-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2015
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I'm pleased you enjoyed. Thank you for the great compliments! smiles. :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, Craving the Hunt, uses its sixteen syllables to basically denounce hunting and the somewhat senseless search for trophies of otherwise harmless animals. Your choice of words and graphic illustration send a powerful message.
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This haiku, Craving the Hunt, uses its sixteen syllables to basically denounce hunting and the somewhat senseless search for trophies of otherwise harmless animals. Your choice of words and graphic illustration send a powerful message.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2015
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Appreciate the kind words. Very encouraging. Thank you very much.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is a dramatic and accusatory haiku that is most expressive. "Man drools" is excellent concrete imagery. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
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This is a dramatic and accusatory haiku that is most expressive. "Man drools" is excellent concrete imagery. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 15-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2015
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Thank you kindly. Encouraging words from one of the best. Big smiles. :)
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Do believe a more fair situation in this conflict would be to give the animals a gun as well as the human.
Winner takes all.
Well written poem that uses terms such as "murderer" to better illustrate how some people view those that hunt.
Should also be a good contest entry.
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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2015
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Do believe a more fair situation in this conflict would be to give the animals a gun as well as the human.
Winner takes all.
Well written poem that uses terms such as "murderer" to better illustrate how some people view those that hunt.
Should also be a good contest entry.
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Comment Written 15-Nov-2015
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Ha! I couldn't agree more. Or at least hand to paw combat, yes? Thanks for the great encouragement. :)
Comment from Domino 2
The thought, let alone the sight, of animal 'trophies' gathered by cowardly men-murderers sneaking around with guns, is abhorrent to me, mystery writer.
OK, if they eat all their kill, that's a different matter, but to call this 'sport' when they retain the heads and horns and leave the rest to rot, is beyond me.
Your dramatic economy of words reflect my opinion exactly.
Best wishes, Ray
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The thought, let alone the sight, of animal 'trophies' gathered by cowardly men-murderers sneaking around with guns, is abhorrent to me, mystery writer.
OK, if they eat all their kill, that's a different matter, but to call this 'sport' when they retain the heads and horns and leave the rest to rot, is beyond me.
Your dramatic economy of words reflect my opinion exactly.
Best wishes, Ray
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Comment Written 15-Nov-2015
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We're totally one the same page. I'm so pleased my message came through as intended. Thank you kindly. :)