2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "haiku (radiant hot sun)"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
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Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
A cleverly amusing denouement line.
My favourite thing people say about the sun is commenting on the heat - "The sun's really hot today."
Of course it is, it's a giant ball of fire in the sky!
All the best
GMG
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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
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Hi there,
A cleverly amusing denouement line.
My favourite thing people say about the sun is commenting on the heat - "The sun's really hot today."
Of course it is, it's a giant ball of fire in the sky!
All the best
GMG
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Comment Written 29-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
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LOL I like that, people can be pretty stupid at times. Thank you very much GMG for taking the time to review and for the kind words.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, MariVal
= I love it, 'Sunny side up'.
= You are very good at writing haikus.
= Some I read just don't connect well, but this is another one.
= Nice. (*<*)
* HAPPY NEW YEAR - 2016! *
Cheers & Blessings...
Keep Smilin'... Jackie/Jax (*>*)
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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
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Hi, MariVal
= I love it, 'Sunny side up'.
= You are very good at writing haikus.
= Some I read just don't connect well, but this is another one.
= Nice. (*<*)
* HAPPY NEW YEAR - 2016! *
Cheers & Blessings...
Keep Smilin'... Jackie/Jax (*>*)
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Comment Written 29-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
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Thank you very much for taking the time to review. You are very kind.