The Hard Hallelujah
Praising God in the Pain16 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
Love the artwork you have chosen of the old cross in stone, it is beautiful.
Very well crafted lyrics you have delivered. Not sure if you meant there to be a question mark in this piece. "When the dark of life weighs you down
And pain's your offering?" If so I am sorry, but it left me a bit confused.
God bless!
Steve
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2016
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Love the artwork you have chosen of the old cross in stone, it is beautiful.
Very well crafted lyrics you have delivered. Not sure if you meant there to be a question mark in this piece. "When the dark of life weighs you down
And pain's your offering?" If so I am sorry, but it left me a bit confused.
God bless!
Steve
Comment Written 18-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2016
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Steve, Thank you for catching that question mark. Not sure where that come from. I will totally change it. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Blessings,
Katie
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My pleasure Katie!
Comment from robina1978
An excellent photo that complements your poem perfectly. It is mainly about suffering. I can see this can be sung. The refrain is a surplus that makes it even better. Thanks for sharing this with us all.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2016
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An excellent photo that complements your poem perfectly. It is mainly about suffering. I can see this can be sung. The refrain is a surplus that makes it even better. Thanks for sharing this with us all.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2016
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Thank you for the generous stars!! I really appreciate you reading and commenting on this piece!
Blessings,
Katie
Comment from Ben Colder
Excellent tribute to the only God. Our Lord Jesus, the manifestation of the Most High. Love the song of worship, love the one it sings to. Hallelujah. Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2016
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Excellent tribute to the only God. Our Lord Jesus, the manifestation of the Most High. Love the song of worship, love the one it sings to. Hallelujah. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2016
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Wow, six stars. I am honored! Thank you. This was such a healing piece to write.
Thank you for reading and commenting.
Blessings,
Katie
Comment from royowen
A lovely scripture from the Psalmist, I guess we've all had Hannah/Abraham moments, our souls have been torn apart by circumstance, but a love so great that God put our pain and suffering and nailed it to the cross, is the greatest gift our God could bestow, well done, nicely arranged and composed, beautifully written, the repeated lines of offering and suffering are very effected, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2016
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A lovely scripture from the Psalmist, I guess we've all had Hannah/Abraham moments, our souls have been torn apart by circumstance, but a love so great that God put our pain and suffering and nailed it to the cross, is the greatest gift our God could bestow, well done, nicely arranged and composed, beautifully written, the repeated lines of offering and suffering are very effected, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 18-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2016
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Thank you Roy, Your kind words and observations are really appreciated. This was was a healing song to write.
Blessings,
Katie
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Well done
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, or song rather, The Hard Hallelujah, moves along quickly with biblical references to mankind's experiences with God. Nice.
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This poem, or song rather, The Hard Hallelujah, moves along quickly with biblical references to mankind's experiences with God. Nice.
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Comment Written 18-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2016
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Thank you for the kind review. Blessings, Katie
Comment from foxangie123
Exceeds excellent. Please visit Paramount Song and submit this to them. They are professionals that specialize well a piece of, in applying music to poetry. Use my name dear. You got it going on...
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Exceeds excellent. Please visit Paramount Song and submit this to them. They are professionals that specialize well a piece of, in applying music to poetry. Use my name dear. You got it going on...
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Comment Written 18-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2016
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Wow thank you for that very kind review. I don't know anything about Paramount Song. Can you tell me more?
Blessings
Katie
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Well go on the Internet to find as I don't want to give out my email any longer and submit this to a company, in Nashville, set amongst Music City USA, where publishing is probably done first, the heart of the Bible Belt, keep your writes and see what the board thinks. Actually here is the direct email. Use my name Angie if ya want. music@paramountsong.com. You can read too on their site. Feel comfortable first.
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Thank you! I will absolutely check it out.
Blessings,
Katie