Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 58 "There You Are"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
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Comment from DonandVicki
The best and most meaningful lyrics that I have reviewed in a great while. I see that you produced this poem/ lyrics some years ago. I can feel the tune and rhythm.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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The best and most meaningful lyrics that I have reviewed in a great while. I see that you produced this poem/ lyrics some years ago. I can feel the tune and rhythm.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Brett. Lovely work mate. It has a beautiful balance and flow with a sweet rhythm. This reminds me of some good old classic country which both you and I enjoy so much. Very nice work Sir.
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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G'day Brett. Lovely work mate. It has a beautiful balance and flow with a sweet rhythm. This reminds me of some good old classic country which both you and I enjoy so much. Very nice work Sir.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 09-Feb-2016
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Comment from judiverse
The narrator in this one admits that he's done some low-down things. We won't need to feel too sorry for him, then. It sounds like he's still willing to take her back, even though she's been cheating on him. Great line--Tangled sheets tell the story of a love that just won't die. Although she's found someone new, you wonder if she'll be happy. The narrator says his love won't die.
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The narrator in this one admits that he's done some low-down things. We won't need to feel too sorry for him, then. It sounds like he's still willing to take her back, even though she's been cheating on him. Great line--Tangled sheets tell the story of a love that just won't die. Although she's found someone new, you wonder if she'll be happy. The narrator says his love won't die.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2016
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
I am glad you decided to share this one that you wrote several years ago. And even though, as you said , 'there is no set rhyme pattern' the words you have chosen, that do rhyme, lend much to the flow of the lyrics.
town/down alone/telephone
die/cry
do/you show/go
and again town/down
Well done, I enjoyed this saga of a bitter-sweet, go nowhere, love affair. I'm a sucker for country love songs. LOL
:-) Carolyn
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I am glad you decided to share this one that you wrote several years ago. And even though, as you said , 'there is no set rhyme pattern' the words you have chosen, that do rhyme, lend much to the flow of the lyrics.
town/down alone/telephone
die/cry
do/you show/go
and again town/down
Well done, I enjoyed this saga of a bitter-sweet, go nowhere, love affair. I'm a sucker for country love songs. LOL
:-) Carolyn
Comment Written 08-Feb-2016
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Comment from Ricky1024
then you are as beautiful and high form poetry written by a great writer and artist and poet Mr Brett West HIGHLY enjoy this one night that's why I gave it six stars continue to supply me with this type of poetry in you should always get the six star review 24 out
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then you are as beautiful and high form poetry written by a great writer and artist and poet Mr Brett West HIGHLY enjoy this one night that's why I gave it six stars continue to supply me with this type of poetry in you should always get the six star review 24 out
Comment Written 08-Feb-2016
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Comment from Spitfire
Oh those mournful country western songs. This poor fella is working hard to convince himself that she's a bitch and maybe he deserves this treatment. At least that's how I read it. I feel the pain he's in. I'd like to hear it sung.
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Oh those mournful country western songs. This poor fella is working hard to convince himself that she's a bitch and maybe he deserves this treatment. At least that's how I read it. I feel the pain he's in. I'd like to hear it sung.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2016
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Comment from I am Cat
Hi Brett,
Very well done, I enjoyed these song lyrics.
I wondered why you didn't categorize them as lyrics?
Is that option not available anymore?
(often the meter maids won't give you a hard time if you
post them as lyrics) lol
I really enjoyed this, especially read aloud, you can definitely pick up on the rhythm... wonderfully done!
Cat
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2016
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Hi Brett,
Very well done, I enjoyed these song lyrics.
I wondered why you didn't categorize them as lyrics?
Is that option not available anymore?
(often the meter maids won't give you a hard time if you
post them as lyrics) lol
I really enjoyed this, especially read aloud, you can definitely pick up on the rhythm... wonderfully done!
Cat
Comment Written 07-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2016
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Comment from MelB
Good song lyrics. It sounds like she is trying to move on with someone else, while he is still waiting for her to come back. They seem to play games with each other.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2016
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Good song lyrics. It sounds like she is trying to move on with someone else, while he is still waiting for her to come back. They seem to play games with each other.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2016
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You're welcome.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Regret always comes too late. If one does not treat the other one right, then it will one or other time backfire. People in love do stupid things and they try to get back to the one who hurts them etc....
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Regret always comes too late. If one does not treat the other one right, then it will one or other time backfire. People in love do stupid things and they try to get back to the one who hurts them etc....
Comment Written 07-Feb-2016
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Comment from royowen
Nicely written Brett, in lovely free verse that has a great lyrical appeal, one doesn't see many of this type many times but you've done well, the language is simple but the language and appeal are wonderfully written well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2016
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Nicely written Brett, in lovely free verse that has a great lyrical appeal, one doesn't see many of this type many times but you've done well, the language is simple but the language and appeal are wonderfully written well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 07-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2016
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
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Most welcome