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A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics

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Comment from Joyce Long
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I cannot imagine staying with a man that went to other women before he came home to me. I married the perfect man and my life has been a blessing. You write really well and I agree with your statement "Always write for your own enjoyment." It would be great to make money with my writings, but money or not--I'll write.
Joyce 02-29-16

 Comment Written 29-Feb-2016


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Comment from NicciFaye
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LOL - well the poem flowed nicely. I don't know either, but love is an odd and fickle entity that humans still have yet to master. The picture is quite funny in its entirety with this poem and presentation. Enjoyed reading it. It made me laugh!

 Comment Written 29-Feb-2016


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Comment from Teri7
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This is a very good country song you have penned. I say country as that is the type I have always listened to except gospel. Very good wording and imagery. Hugs, Teri

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2016


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Comment from misscookie
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You captured my attention from the start.
I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem.
Boy have I heard that song before..
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2016


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    Glad you enjoyed these lyrics miss cookie. Always like to see what you have to say about my writing. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Brett,

You are always great at writing poetry and I sure enjoy reading it. This is another well written poem and I think the guillotine goes well with your words too. Keep writing my friend and I'll keep reading.

Kat

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2016


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reply by MizKat on 28-Feb-2016
    Welcome, Brett.
Comment from GE Parson
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Sound like this ol boy has got a big problem

What keeps her with him? because she as less brains
then he has.

But in realty, the world is full of dependent empty heads
lke her...and him

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2016


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Comment from MelB
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This sounds like a case of the one he truly wanted got away or he couldn't have her for some reason, so he settled for someone else. The first one still haunts his mind. Tough situation for this guy for sure. I would think the one woman wouldn't like playing second fiddle. Another great love gone wrong lyric.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2016


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Comment from brenda bickers
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Hi Brett, I have real trouble getting my head around this predicament.
I do understand that falling in love with two people is possible but you have to know someone to really fall in love with them. If you are already married then why put yourself in this situation unless you are unhappy, but then you should end one before starting another, it seems to me that he wants his cake and eat it.
Guillotine is a bit harsh, firing squad would be better.lol
Brenda

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2016


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    Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Firing Squad would have worked too. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from judiverse
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Why does the woman continue to stay with him, if he's cheating on her? She certainly knows about it. He can't seem to get the new gal out of his mind, though. Yes, he's guilty. Maybe the guillotine is a little bit too much, though? Maybe the old gal leaving him and keeping the house would be a punishment. He's got two women on the string, so there can't be a good outcome. New gal, learn your lesson! You could be the next one he cheats on. Sympathy for the guy? None from me. You do have great rhyme going in this one. judi

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2016


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reply by judiverse on 28-Feb-2016
    You're very welcome. judi
Comment from Ricky1024
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the author author misses his love and for treated as being imprisoned and then manipulate those with his love for her great work your breath really enjoyed this 40 10 to 24

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2016


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