Touching Heaven as Heaven Shall Touc
My thoughts on Death and Life today.17 total reviews
Comment from DonandVicki
I again want to say how painful this must be for you to write but some measure of your son goes on living, helping others. May God bless you so much as you go through this pain.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2016
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I again want to say how painful this must be for you to write but some measure of your son goes on living, helping others. May God bless you so much as you go through this pain.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2016
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thanks ever so much Donald and Mickey to all my fans story family members who sharing my pain and shed a tear for my late song specially coming up now for today is March 1st marking another 13 years without my only son J
Comment from l.raven
Hi Ricky, I can't say I understand God and all he does...I just know that He is there for us...I have had so many things in my life fall apart before my eyes...and I have walked away from Him...but in time I find my way back...Ricky it's our spirit that goes to Heaven...I bet Jay is smiling down on Chas and Bill...so happy for those he saved...he looks like he was a very loving boy...you take care...and God Bless...luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2016
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Hi Ricky, I can't say I understand God and all he does...I just know that He is there for us...I have had so many things in my life fall apart before my eyes...and I have walked away from Him...but in time I find my way back...Ricky it's our spirit that goes to Heaven...I bet Jay is smiling down on Chas and Bill...so happy for those he saved...he looks like he was a very loving boy...you take care...and God Bless...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 29-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2016
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why thanks for that L Raven in your wonderful thoughts and to all my fans story family members here who read my work every day and I'm not going to say that I write like that everyday and I'm talking about my son but I do quite often especially now that we're into the month of March it'll be 213 Marcus since I last saw all my son alive but little that was left to him but he was there for 17 hours on the 30th of March until on April 1st God wraps his arms around him and after the last Oregon was removed in the machine button was switched off and took him to heaven where he needed to be and left behind beautiful memories and for lucky living people when I say these things in the name of Jesus Christ amen
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you are always so welcome Ricky...God holds the most important part of Jay...his spirit and all the love that he was...enjoy those kids...and those grandkids...they grow up too darn fast...luff Linda xxoo
Comment from royowen
Touching heaven is a fine piece of literature that touched me, obviously Jason was involved in an accident, was put on life support, and eventually taken off and became an organ, I think I have it right, and this appeal is for FS members to do likewise, of course all those who love God are in touch with the master of the universe, well done, well written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2016
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Touching heaven is a fine piece of literature that touched me, obviously Jason was involved in an accident, was put on life support, and eventually taken off and became an organ, I think I have it right, and this appeal is for FS members to do likewise, of course all those who love God are in touch with the master of the universe, well done, well written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2016
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thanks for your wonderful review and thoughts on organ tissue donation Roy I actually don't promote it here for fanstory members at basically the kid is just to connect with the gift of life so that donations work in the diaper many percent for him is recognized by not only fan story but the people at the gift of life Ricky 10:24
Comment from BruceMiller
I know you're not interested in my review, but I thought you might want to check these out:
Your title is truncated.
Line 8: ' Lord?" Did you really want the apostrophe instead of a quote?
Line 18: "Can ye now..." If the "ye" is referring to the Lord, wouldn't you want "Ye"?
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reply by the author on 29-Feb-2016
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I know you're not interested in my review, but I thought you might want to check these out:
Your title is truncated.
Line 8: ' Lord?" Did you really want the apostrophe instead of a quote?
Line 18: "Can ye now..." If the "ye" is referring to the Lord, wouldn't you want "Ye"?
Line ??: "Causing Jay's �??�?�¢?�??�?�... This look like a cut-and-paste error; it's fixable.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2016
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thanks Bruce I do believe you this before I finished editing it since it was written to a phone and there's always played a lot of hours that way but thanks for your thoughts I will check that out Ricky 1024
Comment from Joyce Long
It is so difficult to read your work about the lose of your son. It is difficult to lose loved ones. I feel your lose in each of the poems that I read. I've shared our lose with you before, but it does make reading your work difficult. Well written.
Joyce 02-29-16
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reply by the author on 29-Feb-2016
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It is so difficult to read your work about the lose of your son. It is difficult to lose loved ones. I feel your lose in each of the poems that I read. I've shared our lose with you before, but it does make reading your work difficult. Well written.
Joyce 02-29-16
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Comment Written 29-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2016
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yes difficult choices maybe not releasing the pain is in the immensity we don't want it to remain and then as we can release the pain we also dedicate are beautiful painful words to our loved ones that's the main reason why I write thanks for your review on this amazing piece 4G have a wonderful day Ricky 10:24
Comment from reconciled
hey Rick...-smile-
that is correct Sir, you have more to do here.
I can imagine...only imagine what losing that much has done to you. I do know that it changes every aspect of your from then on. I hear you Bro....and I'm glad you're here. love Michael
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2016
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hey Rick...-smile-
that is correct Sir, you have more to do here.
I can imagine...only imagine what losing that much has done to you. I do know that it changes every aspect of your from then on. I hear you Bro....and I'm glad you're here. love Michael
Comment Written 29-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2016
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he's at my quote of the day smile let me see what do I have to smile about well I am quite wealthy are the second largest LP record collection stay in New Jersey worth millions of dollars out of Victorian antique furniture in my house worth a lot of money I have antiques I have a very large and old doll collection because I invest in estate sales I'm one of those people that work in the right place at the wrong time because I don't have any money when I go find these mystery unadvertised estate sales are just be driving by your house to see people standing outside and they'll be a sign that estate sale out front like oh s*** on the money but I always carry cheque book with me the last time I did it I was driving a brand new Cadillac test driving it I kept it all day moving stuff out of that place of the guys like call my phone burning it up and I went so I went and brought the car back around eight hours later and I said well my one hour test drive turned in an all day a boring affair I said but I so I went and rode him out a check for the car and I said I'll be back tomorrow to pick it up and get ready but you have a wonderful day Mr Michael Ricky Ricky
Comment from Kassa-Leigh
A very good and well written script! It is beautiful to see what your son had given to allow others to live. One correction that I see is that the word "provened" should really be "proven". Other than that, it was a good read. God bless!
Cheryl-Lynette
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A very good and well written script! It is beautiful to see what your son had given to allow others to live. One correction that I see is that the word "provened" should really be "proven". Other than that, it was a good read. God bless!
Cheryl-Lynette
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Comment Written 28-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2016
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thanks Casa and I caught that or the estate stated proven in the Phil asked me out of here in the next Ricky 10:24 and I'm glad you enjoyed this piece look for a follow up Ricky Ricky