Act of Endurance
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Comment from thonnigford09
I really liked this poem. I believe it's a free form. Spiritually guiding. heart felt. Nicely done and I would recommend it.
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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016
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I really liked this poem. I believe it's a free form. Spiritually guiding. heart felt. Nicely done and I would recommend it.
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Comment Written 04-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016
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Glad this work found interests. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
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Thanks!!!!!!!!
Comment from tfawcus
A poem full of thanks to the Lord for all of his help and guidance, culminating in the one enigmatic word, "Because" on the gravestone. I think, by the way, that this would be clearer if you put that word in inverted commas in your final line.
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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2016
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A poem full of thanks to the Lord for all of his help and guidance, culminating in the one enigmatic word, "Because" on the gravestone. I think, by the way, that this would be clearer if you put that word in inverted commas in your final line.
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Comment Written 04-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2016
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I will take into consideration your suggestion, glad work was easy in its appeal to you. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed thoughts.