Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Well I think you did a good job on this type of poem. I have not gotten the courage to try this type of poem yet. Very good wording and imagery. Teri

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2016

Thank you, Teri, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from GoodHearted Woman

Excellent

I think you did great. My fun-meter lit up my hair! At least it was different and it was not boring. Is that the logo for Minute Rice? Hahah--it looks like it.
I was really intimidated about doing my first one--also my first etheree. I must not be too good at trying new things. Fun read for me. GoodHearted Woman

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 Comment Written 01-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2016

Thank you, GHW, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from jusylee72

Excellent

counting , Interesting take on this minute prompt. i haven't attempted it yet. i did a nonet and fun. However, I am not sure they will no the consequences. Clever.
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 Comment Written 01-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2016

Thank you, jusylee, for giving this a look. Bill