The Lone Horseman
Chapter One15 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
A perfectly written piece. No problems noted for change. The descriptions left us wanting more and the intrigue of learning why was left hanging as should be to entice the reader.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2016
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A perfectly written piece. No problems noted for change. The descriptions left us wanting more and the intrigue of learning why was left hanging as should be to entice the reader.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this story.
Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
An excellent beginning. Good luck. You're brave to write a western. Phyllis Stewart has written westerns and I find out from my experience, it's true, people on FanStory don't read westerns.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2016
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An excellent beginning. Good luck. You're brave to write a western. Phyllis Stewart has written westerns and I find out from my experience, it's true, people on FanStory don't read westerns.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this story.
Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from DR DIP
Hmmm Firstly what a beautiful painting Brett. Yeah this angle of story could get interesting it just depends on the direction you take it I suppose there are many courses and results this story could take. Yep give it a go
dip
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2016
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Hmmm Firstly what a beautiful painting Brett. Yeah this angle of story could get interesting it just depends on the direction you take it I suppose there are many courses and results this story could take. Yep give it a go
dip
Comment Written 02-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2016
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Dip,
appreciate the input.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written start to a new story. I cannot find any errors. It all seem good. It will be interedting to see how the story develops.
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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2016
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A very well-written start to a new story. I cannot find any errors. It all seem good. It will be interedting to see how the story develops.
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Comment Written 01-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2016
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Appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
I like the idea. It has merit in both a historical type novel and mysterious main character, who seems to have a complicated persona. I would read more from this series.
As an author of multiple series, there is nothing wrong with having more than one going. This can appeal to different audiences.
Good luck with it,
Rhonda
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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2016
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I like the idea. It has merit in both a historical type novel and mysterious main character, who seems to have a complicated persona. I would read more from this series.
As an author of multiple series, there is nothing wrong with having more than one going. This can appeal to different audiences.
Good luck with it,
Rhonda
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2016
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Appreciate your comments and support.