A Classless Legacy
a blank verse contest entry16 total reviews
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A very lovely blank verse, my friend. So much faith and wisdom it contains. Lovely presentation as well. Best wishes in the contest~Debbie
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A very lovely blank verse, my friend. So much faith and wisdom it contains. Lovely presentation as well. Best wishes in the contest~Debbie
Comment Written 01-Dec-2016
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A great blank verse poem. We as humans think we need to have power and treasures to be accepted by God. It is a mistake. He want simple down to earth people who know they need Him.
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A great blank verse poem. We as humans think we need to have power and treasures to be accepted by God. It is a mistake. He want simple down to earth people who know they need Him.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2016
Comment from Sasha
This is absolutely beautiful. A wonderful, smooth flowing, and incredibly uplifting free verse. I enjoyed this immensely and it touched me so deeply it deserves no less than a 6 star rating. Terrific entry for this contest and I sincerely wish you all the best.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2016
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This is absolutely beautiful. A wonderful, smooth flowing, and incredibly uplifting free verse. I enjoyed this immensely and it touched me so deeply it deserves no less than a 6 star rating. Terrific entry for this contest and I sincerely wish you all the best.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2016
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You have no idea how much it means to me to see this as my first review for this blank verse poem, Sasha. I have been looking at my reservation for the contest for weeks, but simply wasn't yet inspired, when suddenly I knew what I wanted/needed to write. The words came from someplace that made me cry when it was finished - with joy, not sorrow.
Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
Comment from royowen
The thing I love, because of Christ, God sees us in the same light, I don't understand it, but we are promised co heirsship, equal inheritence a now seat in high places (heaven) how we're here and yet there, I'm not sure, but that's the mystery of infinity. Timeless, endless, like the universe. Well done, Dawn, this is a marvellous blank verse entry, a wonderful job, well done, blessings, Roy
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The thing I love, because of Christ, God sees us in the same light, I don't understand it, but we are promised co heirsship, equal inheritence a now seat in high places (heaven) how we're here and yet there, I'm not sure, but that's the mystery of infinity. Timeless, endless, like the universe. Well done, Dawn, this is a marvellous blank verse entry, a wonderful job, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 30-Nov-2016
Comment from Mary Wakeford
Hi Dawn, this is a lovely free verse with words we can all strive to achieve in our daily walk through life. They say kindness is the new black, but honestly, I'm not sure why that is a concept and action being toted as something new. It kind of explains where society has dipped over the last few decades. Good luck in the contest.
humility in plenty not to judge (looks like from my view you have an extra space before judge)
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Hi Dawn, this is a lovely free verse with words we can all strive to achieve in our daily walk through life. They say kindness is the new black, but honestly, I'm not sure why that is a concept and action being toted as something new. It kind of explains where society has dipped over the last few decades. Good luck in the contest.
humility in plenty not to judge (looks like from my view you have an extra space before judge)
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Comment Written 30-Nov-2016
Comment from country ranch writer
Very beautiful in every way to ha be this flow like silk across the page with heart felt worth for ones legacy.the music to af that wonderful extra touch to the poem
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Very beautiful in every way to ha be this flow like silk across the page with heart felt worth for ones legacy.the music to af that wonderful extra touch to the poem
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2016