Comment from Heidi M

Excellent

Tellin' it like it is. You have a good rhyme scheme and have definitely displayed attitude. I liked the line asking if you're a hero for getting in and out of a sinking boat.
Good luck in this contest.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2016

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Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes this is well-written definitely loads of attitude in your poem I don't think you've missed anything you done very well good luck in the contest regards Jill

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Comment from joeruptak

Exceptional

I have five more six star ratings to give if it were legal. I would give them all to you
this should be in every high school library. Posted in
letters a foot high, I know most wont agree , but somehow
this is a message they should hear
this is a great piece , you have my admiration and respect for your talent and having the guts to tell it like it is
great job. This is one I will bookmark

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2016

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Comment from Thomas Bowling

Exceptional

Absolutely great.

An excellent contest entry. You should do well. It seems to meet all the requirements for this contest. Good luck. I hope you win.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2016

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Comment from RodG

Excellent

Wow! The Speaker in this poem does not waste words or pity on those who won't help themselves. He certainly hasn't left anyone off his list.
And to be honest, most people have SHARED his attitude at one time or another. This entry should do well in the contest.

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 Comment Written 05-Dec-2016

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Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

I don't know who you are but I have to say that I do agree with most elements here, although you put it very strongly! lol

There is a genuine lack of responsibility in the world today and everyone likes to play the victim.

Good luck to you
GMG

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