Once upon the heart..
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "If only I could..."Love poems
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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
What a combination of different descriptions that filled this love filled piece.
Very nicely done as it flowed so lovingly and easy. I loved the second stanza with its mosaic snowflake ballet.
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What a combination of different descriptions that filled this love filled piece.
Very nicely done as it flowed so lovingly and easy. I loved the second stanza with its mosaic snowflake ballet.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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thank you Barb for yet another wonderful review!!! I sure do appreciate it!!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A sweet sentiment to want to sugar coat someone's world because you love them so much, your poem oozing with love and affection, lucky guy! Love dolly x
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A sweet sentiment to want to sugar coat someone's world because you love them so much, your poem oozing with love and affection, lucky guy! Love dolly x
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
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:-) aw thank you for this sweet review!!!
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh, Susan...sigh...you do write some beautiful romance...what amazing imagery this evokes - makes me wish to be the one this was written for (if you were a man - LOL). Just gorgeous!
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Oh, Susan...sigh...you do write some beautiful romance...what amazing imagery this evokes - makes me wish to be the one this was written for (if you were a man - LOL). Just gorgeous!
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you Dawn...I sure do appreciate always taking the time to read and review!!!
Comment from patcelaw
I really like this love poem. Your wording is such as it paints in my mind very vivid pictures throughout. Many blessings for a great day. Patricia
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I really like this love poem. Your wording is such as it paints in my mind very vivid pictures throughout. Many blessings for a great day. Patricia
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you Pat for such a nice review...always appreciate it!!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem and an excellent statement ifvwe could we would do many things for our loved ones, even the impossible if we only could.
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A very well-written poem and an excellent statement ifvwe could we would do many things for our loved ones, even the impossible if we only could.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Hi Sandra!!! Thank you so very much!!!
Comment from DR DIP
That is beautiful Susan..The ultimate love poem I can see it as a love song as well You have a beautiful way with words Susan. Thankyou for sharing
dip
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That is beautiful Susan..The ultimate love poem I can see it as a love song as well You have a beautiful way with words Susan. Thankyou for sharing
dip
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
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Hi Dipster....and thank you for reading! :-)
Comment from mbagby23
I like how the first and last line are the same. If only I could. Very lovable and sweet. I am left wondering if they person would be willing to let them love them. The flow is smooth for start to finish.
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I like how the first and last line are the same. If only I could. Very lovable and sweet. I am left wondering if they person would be willing to let them love them. The flow is smooth for start to finish.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
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AHHHHHH and that is the question!!!.... :-) thanks for reading and the awesome review!!
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Beautiful words concocted to make for a truly beautiful and emotional piece of poetry. It is yearning, it is special, it is exhilarating, you have a real talent and way with words. I love this wonderful poem and really think you have nailed it in this poem in terms of flow, rhyme scheme, the poem as a whole is utter brilliance. Well done, kindest regards, Meia :)
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Beautiful words concocted to make for a truly beautiful and emotional piece of poetry. It is yearning, it is special, it is exhilarating, you have a real talent and way with words. I love this wonderful poem and really think you have nailed it in this poem in terms of flow, rhyme scheme, the poem as a whole is utter brilliance. Well done, kindest regards, Meia :)
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
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OH MEIA!!! you make me smile!!! What a great review!! Thank you so much!!
Comment from sandy montgomery
Very romantic and flowery. Lots of beautiful imagery. Great lyrical quality. Your rhymes are natural and unforced. Good flow of ideas from line to line. Thank you for sharing your work.
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Very romantic and flowery. Lots of beautiful imagery. Great lyrical quality. Your rhymes are natural and unforced. Good flow of ideas from line to line. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
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aw thanks so much sandy!!!!
Comment from Quantum Traveler
The Art Work sets well with your Writing Susan it reminds me of a particular artist.
Your Love Poem flows very well from beginning to end.
"If Only I Could"...The Title and the way you use this caption throughout your writing is Quite Interesting in My Process of Thought as I see a lot of Depth in between the lines and how the reading plays out to the very end..."If Only I Could"
A Well Written Love Poem Leaving a Lot to the Imagination..."Would You or Could You"??????...Very Nice Susan...Quantum Traveler...Phil.
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The Art Work sets well with your Writing Susan it reminds me of a particular artist.
Your Love Poem flows very well from beginning to end.
"If Only I Could"...The Title and the way you use this caption throughout your writing is Quite Interesting in My Process of Thought as I see a lot of Depth in between the lines and how the reading plays out to the very end..."If Only I Could"
A Well Written Love Poem Leaving a Lot to the Imagination..."Would You or Could You"??????...Very Nice Susan...Quantum Traveler...Phil.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
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Oh now Phil, ya know...a woman has to leave something to the imagination!! :-)... Thanks for all those shiny stars!!!..dang! you spoil me!!!
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Imagination...Aaaaah Yes...A Lovely Lady does that Very Well.
Sorry I didn't know where to Send the Twelve Red Roses with the One Pure White Rose set in the Middle...Yes I Could Spoil You...This was a Very Nice Writing...Q.T...Phil.