Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

This is a very well written poem, my friend. I really like:

Gold, sunclipsed skies,
stars mesmerize ...
vanishing out of sight.
Where miles befell,
splendors dispel,
your absence dims the light.

Great imagery, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017

Hi Debbie! pleased you enjoyed this poem! thanks for the review!!

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

The evocative artwork you selected established the mood well for your love poem. I admired the form with six-line stanzas and rhymes. Your "sunclipsed skies" coinage is memorable. Well done! -Joan

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017

Well thank you!!! Been wanting to use that word! LOL

Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

It's hard when we're missing that one special person. We got talking at work today about military families, trucker families and all those other professions who spend a lot of time away from their families. I couldn't do it. It takes a special person. You did a wonderful job with this

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017

Thank you so very much!!! I appreciate the wonderful review!

Comment from Mastery

Exceptional

My aching heart,
when we're apart,
erodes with every beat.
Fiery blue eyes,
sets fire my thighs ...
smoldering trick's a treat."

Very well done, Susan. A wonderful poem from start to finish.

Bravo! Blessings, Bob

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017

HI Bob! Thanks for reading!!..I so appreciate YOU!

Comment from MelB

Excellent

Hi Susan, missing someone is very real and painful. It does make like offbeat and incomplete - great descriptions. Your picture looks a lot like Alexandra Paul from the original Baywatch TV show.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017

Missing someone is so difficult! Thank you for reading and for the review!!!

Comment from Bill O'Bier

Excellent

Hello Susan:
A great heartfelt love poem about missing your lover. Whoever thought up the phrase 'Absence makes the heart grow founder' was an idiot. I think that missing someone I love makes me a little crazy.
All the best...
Bill~

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017

Hi Bill! I SOOOO agree with you!!! grow fonder? hah blah blah...sounds all pretty...but missing someone is maddening! thanks for the review!!

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

A haunting and seductive rhythm with this one. I enjoyed it immensely. It seems arachaic and also modern. I guess not all that much has change in love matters, a brilliant poem to be very proud of kind regards Meia x

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017

Hello wordy girl!! thank you for the wonderful review!!!

Comment from Janet Foor

Exceptional

A magical love poem Susan filled with eloquent language and lovely rhyme.
Each line a joy to read. Very nicely done.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017

Hi Janet, thank you for reading and for the wonderful review! Glad you enjoyed my poem.

Comment from Irish Rain

Exceptional

'I'm missing you, heart's all askew'...how very beautiful, leading into one lovely verse after another. You have SUCH a talent for love poems!!! Really enjoyed this one, blessings...

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017

oh dear friend!!..6 stars?..thank you!..I'm smiling!!! :-)))

reply by Irish Rain on 14-Mar-2017

You're most welcome!!

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

Excellent Poem! The author's words are strong, loving and creative. The reader
pondered on the words of this love. The artwork is perfect and compliments this
poem well.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017

Well thank you very much!!!! i appreciate you taking the time to read and review!!! :-))