Pink Tears
5/7/5 Contest Entry20 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
Beautiful sentiments expressed in a few words. Should be a real contender in the contest. Artwork worked well with it. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Beautiful sentiments expressed in a few words. Should be a real contender in the contest. Artwork worked well with it. Best wishes.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Thank you
Comment from Taffspride
I love the picture you have painted with your well penned 5-7-5.
A fine entry for the contest, in my eyes this is certainly a winner. I also like the way you have formatted it. Great job.
Good luck in the contest.
Iechyd da
Ann
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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I love the picture you have painted with your well penned 5-7-5.
A fine entry for the contest, in my eyes this is certainly a winner. I also like the way you have formatted it. Great job.
Good luck in the contest.
Iechyd da
Ann
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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Thank you once again, Ann. I was trying to write it in a "faux" haiku style. l just wanted to capture the feeling of beauty and time passing on. I'm sure you get what I am feebly aiming for. I so appreciate your reviews. There are so few I enjoy any more. The exceptional is wonderful, but your insight is far more important. Hugs
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem. When the cherry blossoms fall to he ground like pink tears on the temple pond. Spring is over and only the memories remain.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem. When the cherry blossoms fall to he ground like pink tears on the temple pond. Spring is over and only the memories remain.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review.
Comment from ronnie k
It is hard too say what the gift of poetry can speak and give vision, this poem offers peace and equaled voice "blossoms drop like tears" well delivered
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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It is hard too say what the gift of poetry can speak and give vision, this poem offers peace and equaled voice "blossoms drop like tears" well delivered
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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Thank you. This was written a faux haiku style, therefore I get your comment written assessment. I wanted to capture a moment, and appreciate your review.
Comment from dmt1967
The words and the pink background colour fit together and I like the poem being small as well as the picture. This is a very cute poem. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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The words and the pink background colour fit together and I like the poem being small as well as the picture. This is a very cute poem. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the review
Comment from InHisownwrite
Using very few words to express a thought in the confines of a certain poetic stance can be very difficult... But apparently not from you..... Love it...
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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Using very few words to express a thought in the confines of a certain poetic stance can be very difficult... But apparently not from you..... Love it...
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much for this lovely review and compliment.
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Welcome.............
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is a colourful mix of sweet and sour work of word art painted on water like memory, I liked and enjoyed the read; it strikes my feeling of cheerfulness of spring and sourly sweet flows of memory.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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This is a colourful mix of sweet and sour work of word art painted on water like memory, I liked and enjoyed the read; it strikes my feeling of cheerfulness of spring and sourly sweet flows of memory.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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Thank you for getting the double meaning I was intending with this little piece. I always appreciate a reviewer who actually tries to grasp what the poet is trying to convey.
Comment from Katherine2
A lovely title... Your syllable count was excellent bringing a beautiful message. Unfortunately, I believe that 'Spring a memory,' might have been more in tune if it had been Springs... the count of course did not allow that. I thought 'Temple pond' was such a nice finish to bringing your point and message across. Nice job! Good luck. Take car~Katherine
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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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A lovely title... Your syllable count was excellent bringing a beautiful message. Unfortunately, I believe that 'Spring a memory,' might have been more in tune if it had been Springs... the count of course did not allow that. I thought 'Temple pond' was such a nice finish to bringing your point and message across. Nice job! Good luck. Take car~Katherine
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Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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Thank you for very uninspiring review.
Comment from tfawcus
This tells of both the beauty and transience of spring. How short the time before the blossoms fall and the garnd show is over. I once visited Japan during the cherry blossom season. It was absolutely magnificent.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017
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This tells of both the beauty and transience of spring. How short the time before the blossoms fall and the garnd show is over. I once visited Japan during the cherry blossom season. It was absolutely magnificent.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017
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Thank you for such a well thought out review
Comment from Mustang Patty
The cherry blossom petals do indeed look like pink tears. The imagery created by this little 5-7-5 is immense. Thank you for sharing this well penned poem with the perfectly matched artwork,
~patty~
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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017
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The cherry blossom petals do indeed look like pink tears. The imagery created by this little 5-7-5 is immense. Thank you for sharing this well penned poem with the perfectly matched artwork,
~patty~
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Comment Written 14-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the review.