To call you friend
My first friend and still now17 total reviews
Comment from sheena121
A very nice dedication to a good friend. Well written with rythm and good composition, nice length of lines and good choice of words. Very nice.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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A very nice dedication to a good friend. Well written with rythm and good composition, nice length of lines and good choice of words. Very nice.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Thank you very much, it is great to hear about length and lines very encouraging for me Thank you****kahpot
Comment from Mustang Patty
Finding a friend such as the one described in the words of the poem is a true treasure. Your work describes the kind of person we all would love to have in our lives, but the true trick is to BE that person for someone else - or at least be willing to,
~patty~
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Finding a friend such as the one described in the words of the poem is a true treasure. Your work describes the kind of person we all would love to have in our lives, but the true trick is to BE that person for someone else - or at least be willing to,
~patty~
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Thank you very much, with having such a friend I would like to think I could be? as what this person has done for me I would be more than willing to help someone else****kahpot
Comment from Chrissy710
This is a lovely poem and your rhyme and meter makes for a smooth easy read. I liked you style and couplets that seemed to just fit in nicely. A truly hearfelt poem that makes a great statement of hope in adversity and we all need a friend. Well done Kaphot Cheers Christineð???ð???
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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This is a lovely poem and your rhyme and meter makes for a smooth easy read. I liked you style and couplets that seemed to just fit in nicely. A truly hearfelt poem that makes a great statement of hope in adversity and we all need a friend. Well done Kaphot Cheers Christineð???ð???
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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WOW a 6 Thank you so much and yes I was helped immensely when I needed it the most, my friend is worth more but I keep letting them know Thank you again very much****kahpot
Comment from Chairman Anyhow
wow ... a great piece, I suspect it maybe autobiographical, if so well done for sharing your story. A heartfelt poem and ultimately a lesson in hope. Very well written and the narrative feels "true" and real
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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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wow ... a great piece, I suspect it maybe autobiographical, if so well done for sharing your story. A heartfelt poem and ultimately a lesson in hope. Very well written and the narrative feels "true" and real
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Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Thank you, Chairman, I would have thought with 4 stars you might have had some help for me on how to improve****kahpot
Comment from Teri7
I enjoyed reading this song/poem you have penned. you used very good descriptive wording. You explained in your poem why this person was so special to you. I like the art work you used. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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I enjoyed reading this song/poem you have penned. you used very good descriptive wording. You explained in your poem why this person was so special to you. I like the art work you used. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from tfawcus
It's a long road back from alcoholism and a friend along the way is a friend indeed. More than a friend, in fact, as your poem suggests. More of a saviour.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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It's a long road back from alcoholism and a friend along the way is a friend indeed. More than a friend, in fact, as your poem suggests. More of a saviour.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Thank you for understanding, no criticism intended but from what I understand, from alcoholism, there is no road back just a different one, but whatever road, a friend is definitely needed****kahpot
Comment from Jackarrie
Hi
I really enjoyed reading your well written poem. The emotions are expressed in well chosen words. The rhymes are excellent. To find a support for to stop drinking is wonderful. I wonder what it sounds like with music.
Well done
Mary
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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Hi
I really enjoyed reading your well written poem. The emotions are expressed in well chosen words. The rhymes are excellent. To find a support for to stop drinking is wonderful. I wonder what it sounds like with music.
Well done
Mary
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Comment Written 17-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Thank you, Jackarrie I for your wonderful comment for the music I will have to find help****kahpot