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Comment from evilynne
That is a totally wonderful poem, well written, and enjoyable. It floats like springtime. Reading it was a pleasure. Evi
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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That is a totally wonderful poem, well written, and enjoyable. It floats like springtime. Reading it was a pleasure. Evi
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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thank you Evi!! Appreciate you taking the time to read and review.
Comment from patcelaw
Susan, this is a most lovely poem. Your rhyming is a delight and I love the picturesque wording. May your week be blessed with good and lovely things. Patricia
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Susan, this is a most lovely poem. Your rhyming is a delight and I love the picturesque wording. May your week be blessed with good and lovely things. Patricia
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Hi Pat! Thank you again for the wonderful review!!!
Comment from lyenochka
This is a lovely, well-constructed poem with great imagery. I like "Heaven's duvet" and "wish-makers." I'm impressed with the regular rhymes in every first and third line. And it finishes nicely with "souls perfectly arranged" reminiscent of the perfect arrangement of the dandelion seed head.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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This is a lovely, well-constructed poem with great imagery. I like "Heaven's duvet" and "wish-makers." I'm impressed with the regular rhymes in every first and third line. And it finishes nicely with "souls perfectly arranged" reminiscent of the perfect arrangement of the dandelion seed head.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thank you for this fantastic review and six stars! I do appreciate it!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Wish fulfilling like dandelion yellow wonder blooming, the poet so writes, how love gets fulfilled with your love support and brings in colours of living in changes; fantastic; I loved and enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Wish fulfilling like dandelion yellow wonder blooming, the poet so writes, how love gets fulfilled with your love support and brings in colours of living in changes; fantastic; I loved and enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much for this review! I do appreciate it!
Comment from DonandVicki
"In bloom of youth, one speaks the truth". How very profound. I think we lose that innocence at a very early age, how sad. I love the structure of your poem.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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"In bloom of youth, one speaks the truth". How very profound. I think we lose that innocence at a very early age, how sad. I love the structure of your poem.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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:-) Thank you for reading and for taking the time to review! Very much appreciated.
Comment from DR DIP
Susan I so love your writing as i have said a few times before, you have a wonderful way with words. I love the double rhyme lines it creates a beautiful rhythm.
thanks for sharing
dip
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Susan I so love your writing as i have said a few times before, you have a wonderful way with words. I love the double rhyme lines it creates a beautiful rhythm.
thanks for sharing
dip
Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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:-) just smiling Dip...I love hearing from you.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a truly beautiful love poem - although uneven in a couple of spots, it no way detracts from the poet's lovely articulation. These areas can be evened and therefore smoother in flow, simply by rereading the poem and by reading it aloud several times...
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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In my opinion, a truly beautiful love poem - although uneven in a couple of spots, it no way detracts from the poet's lovely articulation. These areas can be evened and therefore smoother in flow, simply by rereading the poem and by reading it aloud several times...
Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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yes! I found them!! I'll will work on that today...good catch...thank you so very much! :-)
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You are so welcome, Susan - a beautiful piece...Eve
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
the internal rhyme is perfectly done and I admire anyone who can do this as well as you have. A different love poem thanking one for being there for you. Excellently done
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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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the internal rhyme is perfectly done and I admire anyone who can do this as well as you have. A different love poem thanking one for being there for you. Excellently done
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Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Hi Barb, thank you again for taking the time to read and review! I do appreciate you.
Comment from kahpot
Like so many others I love, love poems and this is no exception wonderful words exciting to read with great flow and the artwork enhances well done****kahpot
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Like so many others I love, love poems and this is no exception wonderful words exciting to read with great flow and the artwork enhances well done****kahpot
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Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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:-) Thank you so very much!!