Three Word Phrases 4
This is part 4 of the series16 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Now you added one of my favorite that I remember from songs of way back. Stay the course. This one is my favorite of the other three. It feels so peaceful
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
Now you added one of my favorite that I remember from songs of way back. Stay the course. This one is my favorite of the other three. It feels so peaceful
Comment Written 04-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the nice review, Barb.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
These are very creative and I have enjoyed them a lot. This one is so full of wisdom, things we should all do and often forget to. Well done, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
These are very creative and I have enjoyed them a lot. This one is so full of wisdom, things we should all do and often forget to. Well done, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 04-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the nice review, Debbie.
Comment from Mark Valentine
This was such a creative idea for a story. The way you've framed the three word phrases keeps it from being trite and accentuates these little kernels of wisdom. It is positive, affirming, and uplifting. I'm going to put this pone on the bookcase - I can imaging going back to it from time to time to start my day off with the right attitude - thanks!
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
This was such a creative idea for a story. The way you've framed the three word phrases keeps it from being trite and accentuates these little kernels of wisdom. It is positive, affirming, and uplifting. I'm going to put this pone on the bookcase - I can imaging going back to it from time to time to start my day off with the right attitude - thanks!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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Thank you Mark, for the lovely review. I am glad you enjoyed this writing.
Comment from MelB
Hi Patricia, I think you did a fantastic job in writing these. They were filled with many truths and great life lessons for all. They are inspiring! I would like to try one, after I get my book finished. I'm two chapters out! Then, on to editing. I'm excited about this one. I only wish mom could have read the ending.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
Hi Patricia, I think you did a fantastic job in writing these. They were filled with many truths and great life lessons for all. They are inspiring! I would like to try one, after I get my book finished. I'm two chapters out! Then, on to editing. I'm excited about this one. I only wish mom could have read the ending.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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Thank you Melissa, for your lovely review. have a blessed day.
Comment from Sasha
Good morning dear Patricia. I was almost out the door to have coffee with my friend Barbara and decided to make a quick check-in to see what was in my message box. What a delight to find this there. As I read, I found several things that I do every day. I walk to the beach five-blocks away to watch the sunset every night. I find it a spiritual experience and a restful time to contemplate how much I have to be thankful for. I always make a point to say something positive and uplifting to a stranger, especially an elderly person. Even a smile while saying Buenos Dias can put a smile on their face. Mothers and fathers always walk their children to school. I often sit on the curb and watch these little angels pass by and smile at their parents and tell them their children are so precious. To know I have the power to make someone smile, is rewarding in so many ways. This has been a lovely and fun series you have posted. I do hope others will take up the challenge and write a few of their own. Excellent work with this, I have enjoyed all of them immensely. Have a lovely day, sweet Patricia.
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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
Good morning dear Patricia. I was almost out the door to have coffee with my friend Barbara and decided to make a quick check-in to see what was in my message box. What a delight to find this there. As I read, I found several things that I do every day. I walk to the beach five-blocks away to watch the sunset every night. I find it a spiritual experience and a restful time to contemplate how much I have to be thankful for. I always make a point to say something positive and uplifting to a stranger, especially an elderly person. Even a smile while saying Buenos Dias can put a smile on their face. Mothers and fathers always walk their children to school. I often sit on the curb and watch these little angels pass by and smile at their parents and tell them their children are so precious. To know I have the power to make someone smile, is rewarding in so many ways. This has been a lovely and fun series you have posted. I do hope others will take up the challenge and write a few of their own. Excellent work with this, I have enjoyed all of them immensely. Have a lovely day, sweet Patricia.
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Comment Written 04-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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Thank you Sasha, for the most lovely review. I am glad you include some ot the things in your daily life.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Thank you for sharing this poem of praise and prayer. It is so very important for us to dwell on the GOOD things we have in front of us every day. Your piece reminded me that there are SO many things to be thankful for,
~patty~
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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
Thank you for sharing this poem of praise and prayer. It is so very important for us to dwell on the GOOD things we have in front of us every day. Your piece reminded me that there are SO many things to be thankful for,
~patty~
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Comment Written 04-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Patty. These four writings were quite a challenge, but well worth the effort.