Comment from marybell1

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your Acrostic poem " Lewis Carroll" and his Alice adventures. You had all your lines correct. Lewis Carroll was one of the all time greats for children.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017

Hi Marybell1,

Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate the kind comments.

Kim

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

I could never get into the Alice in wonderland story not sure what it was but it's never appealed, but creative, imaginative it certainly was. Maybe it was the being beneath the ground that got to me, perhaps I should try it again, one day.
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017

Hi Valda,

Maybe try listening to bits of it, I'm sure you could find it online. Try You Tube, that is where I found the Jabberwocky. It may be easier to listen to than to actually read. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.

Kim

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

this is an astonishing tribute to lewis carroll, our beloved writer who came up with alice (where the f*ck is alice). this is an accurate description of his work dear friend!
thnak you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017

Hi Rebekka,

Thank you for the enthusiastic comments. I truly appreciate the time you've taken to read and review.

Kim

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

I so truly love Lewis Carroll and all his writings and the one of Alice in Wonderland you truly captured in force and how imagination takes us from place to another

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017

Hi Barb,

Thanks for the lovely comments. I always appreciate reading what you think of my poems.

Kim

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

What a most delightful acrostic!! I loved Alice in Wonderland, especially the cat, ha ha. The picture is perfect, the acrostic, sensational! Blessings....

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017

Hi Irish!

Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate all of your fun comments :)

Kim

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

I am a fan of Lewis Carroll and was not aware he was also a poet. You continually teach me something new. I love your acrostic and even more with the rhyme. You are so very talented and I always enjoy reading your posts.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017

Hi! What wonderful compliments. I hope you enjoyed the Jabberwocky video. It is one of his most famous poems. (Contained in Through the Looking Glass.) Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I'm so happy that you are along for this ride. :)

Kim

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is a wonderfully written rhyming acrostic using Lewis Carroll's name. The first two books you have mentioned, "Alice" and "Looking" are most known. I enjoyed the author's note telling more about his life. An interesting man. Marilyn

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017

Hi Marilyn:

Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I'm having a fanciful day lol wait 'til you see the next one! lol (after I build up my bank) Thank you for the delightful comments.

Kim

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

But what if it should come to pass
Your acrostic reads through looking glass
Perhaps that door I'd better shut
Before fall down on my ....

I love the rhymes you have managed to weave into your acrostic. With the above I realised that whether the rhyme scheme went aaba or aabb I was in a hole so decided to stop digging.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017

Hi Pantygynt:

You just might find Alice if you fall down... or more likely, the Mad Hatter lol I think the White Rabbit left with Easter. Thank you for a fun review. You've made me smile. :)

Kim

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

thank you for sharing your acrostic poem and informative author's notes about Lewis Carroll. He certainly gave us a glimpse into another world with his tale about Alice. I often wonder how he came up with these whimsical characters, but then I hear myself telling my granddaughter a story, and I smile to myself. Its so easy to be creative when you have a sponge in front of you,
~patty~

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017

Hi Patty,

He seemed to have an incredible way with children, I think because they didn't judge him. They say he stuttered and that gave him trouble in preaching (he was ordained, but didn't preach) and in lecturing (for obvious reasons. But with the children, he didn't have that problem when he told his tales. Thanks for the great review.

Kim

Comment from Rlegel99

Excellent

Poem about enjoying childhood. The artwork works well with this piece of poetry. Enjoyed the authors notes. This poem has nice flow. Thanks for sharing this piece of poetry.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017

Hi Rlegel,

Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I'm glad you enjoyed this fantasy poem dedicated to Lewis Carroll.

Kim