Hai....KU!..Pardon me
For Gypsy and Dean21 total reviews
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend the haiku is a wonderful form that I am still trying to master for three lines there are so many rules I enjoyed the humor of your poem well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Hello my friend the haiku is a wonderful form that I am still trying to master for three lines there are so many rules I enjoyed the humor of your poem well done regards Jill
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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I am so glad you can see the humour in this fun write Jill
thanks for the review as always
dip
Comment from dragonpoet
Dean and Gypsy Rose are masters of haiku and the humorous ode to them tells how much you think of their talent. It is hard to find enough to say in a review about 3 short lines of poetry. It is true that a well written haiku can touch one deeply.
I like the pun of Hai ku and hah choo.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Dean and Gypsy Rose are masters of haiku and the humorous ode to them tells how much you think of their talent. It is hard to find enough to say in a review about 3 short lines of poetry. It is true that a well written haiku can touch one deeply.
I like the pun of Hai ku and hah choo.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Thankyou so much Dragon Glad you liked it.
dip
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My pleasure.
dp
Comment from melyuki
Hi Dip well that's a very cleverly worded verse that's for sure. Perfect rhyming and great flow, gives this poem a real rocking feeling.. I'm sure Gypsy and Dean delighted in your tongue in cheek verse supporting their Haiku poetry skills. Well done.. cheers mel xxx
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Hi Dip well that's a very cleverly worded verse that's for sure. Perfect rhyming and great flow, gives this poem a real rocking feeling.. I'm sure Gypsy and Dean delighted in your tongue in cheek verse supporting their Haiku poetry skills. Well done.. cheers mel xxx
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Thanks so much Mel glad you liked it.
dip
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hahahaha....
Cobber, I couldn't agree with you more concerning the very lovely and talented Gypsy Blue Rose.
She is EXTREMELY passionate about presenting haiku the way it was intended to be presented, which is more about the journey haiku should take you on than it is about the destination.
Excellent parody with your "haiku" at the end there, dip.
Gypsy does teach classes on this, you know. Heh-heh...
Great write, myfiend friend.
~Deano
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Hahahaha....
Cobber, I couldn't agree with you more concerning the very lovely and talented Gypsy Blue Rose.
She is EXTREMELY passionate about presenting haiku the way it was intended to be presented, which is more about the journey haiku should take you on than it is about the destination.
Excellent parody with your "haiku" at the end there, dip.
Gypsy does teach classes on this, you know. Heh-heh...
Great write, my
~Deano
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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phew! I was so worried you would be pissed off with me I feel relieved and rapt with the six Thankyou
as always dip
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No, I thought it was grrrrrreat, my friend.
Hilarious stuff!
~Deano ;)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written long poem about the short haiku. It seems short to the reader, it is very hard for the poet to write three lines complying to the rules and make perfectly sense to the reader.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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A very well-written long poem about the short haiku. It seems short to the reader, it is very hard for the poet to write three lines complying to the rules and make perfectly sense to the reader.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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It was more a dig in a friendly way Sandra, don't look too far into it lol
I am sure Gypsy and Dean will see the satire in it Well let's hope so
dip
Comment from Thal1959
I have got to give this a six, D. We both love Gypsy and Dean, and I don't believe either of us are too keen on Haiku. So taking a gentle jab at them - with good rhymes and fairly sound meter deserves a ratings boost.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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I have got to give this a six, D. We both love Gypsy and Dean, and I don't believe either of us are too keen on Haiku. So taking a gentle jab at them - with good rhymes and fairly sound meter deserves a ratings boost.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Haha wow a 6 for this shit lol I am very grateful I wrote it as a joke because gypsy and I had a challeng..she would write a rhyme if I wrote her a haiku..hence my last three lines after the poem which I felt very befitting. lol
thanks again Thal
dip
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Challenging other members to write in a form they are normally not to comfortable with is a lot of fun - one of the best things this site can accommodate.
Besides, one might be surprised if the person you challenge comes up with a gem.
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
This is a VERY GOOD poem you've penned.
The title is creative. I like it.
Nice artwork: The image shown is lovely.
Thanks for sharing.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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This is a VERY GOOD poem you've penned.
The title is creative. I like it.
Nice artwork: The image shown is lovely.
Thanks for sharing.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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thanks so much Nicole glad you liked it
dip
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Dip,
Oh yes, the intricacies of the haiku which remain a mystery to so ,any of us, despite the advice and efforts of experts in the field! lol
It is worrying when the review has to run longer than the post... lol
Good little piece which I'm sure they'll appreciate.
All the best
G
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Hi Dip,
Oh yes, the intricacies of the haiku which remain a mystery to so ,any of us, despite the advice and efforts of experts in the field! lol
It is worrying when the review has to run longer than the post... lol
Good little piece which I'm sure they'll appreciate.
All the best
G
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Hehe yes the mysteries. Thanks so much G much appreciated.
dip
Comment from Sis Cat
Dip, this is a spectacular haiku roast! Ouch! I had so much fun reading this. You let your humor rip:
Just three lines and then it's over
No more rolling in the clover
Oh Gypsy Rose you're the Haiku Queen
You take them on with good old Dean,
Your poem is fun, fun, fun making pun, pun. pun at haiku's expense. While I love haiku, I also enjoy the humor of your poem. Your haiku at the end of your pom is hilarious:
Dug a hole
Climbed in it
Dead and buried
Thank you for sharing your tongue in cheek poem that made me smile.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Dip, this is a spectacular haiku roast! Ouch! I had so much fun reading this. You let your humor rip:
Just three lines and then it's over
No more rolling in the clover
Oh Gypsy Rose you're the Haiku Queen
You take them on with good old Dean,
Your poem is fun, fun, fun making pun, pun. pun at haiku's expense. While I love haiku, I also enjoy the humor of your poem. Your haiku at the end of your pom is hilarious:
Dug a hole
Climbed in it
Dead and buried
Thank you for sharing your tongue in cheek poem that made me smile.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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phew Sis. I am so glad you saw the funny side to this fun little poem I have a great respect for Gypsy and Dean and love their works hope they won't be offended.
dip
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Well I think the last three lines are excellent and very poetic. I must say that before I came to Fan Story I knew nothing of the Haiku poems. I've actually bumped into so really extraordinary work. I also know what you mean when you say that is sometimes hard to review such a small amount of words in a poem. I turned past a few because I was speechless. Good job DIP.
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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Well I think the last three lines are excellent and very poetic. I must say that before I came to Fan Story I knew nothing of the Haiku poems. I've actually bumped into so really extraordinary work. I also know what you mean when you say that is sometimes hard to review such a small amount of words in a poem. I turned past a few because I was speechless. Good job DIP.
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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hahaha that's funny Tier. My Haiku was a joke lol. It was just a bit of fun toward our Gypsy Haiku Queen! lol and side kick Dean Kuch. I do find them hard to review being such a short poem.
Thanks Tier much appreciated.
dip