Once upon the heart..
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Comment from Sis Cat
Susan, this is an excellent love poem. I read it twice, the second time aloud. I love the flow, rhythm, meter, and rhymes of your poem. Your romantic imagery is touching and vivid:
Can sun drenched blooms
of sweet perfumes
refuse morning's allure?
Petals outstretch
lovingly etch ...
sunrise memories ensure.
Your poem is refreshing like a bouquet of forget-me-nots. Your words have a gem-like intensity that sparkles. Your poem is finely crafted and envisioned of a couple of lovers having a "nightfall's rendezvous."
Thank you for sharing. I wish you success in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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Susan, this is an excellent love poem. I read it twice, the second time aloud. I love the flow, rhythm, meter, and rhymes of your poem. Your romantic imagery is touching and vivid:
Can sun drenched blooms
of sweet perfumes
refuse morning's allure?
Petals outstretch
lovingly etch ...
sunrise memories ensure.
Your poem is refreshing like a bouquet of forget-me-nots. Your words have a gem-like intensity that sparkles. Your poem is finely crafted and envisioned of a couple of lovers having a "nightfall's rendezvous."
Thank you for sharing. I wish you success in the contest.
Comment Written 22-May-2017
reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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Oh you sweetie! This review is so making me smile!!! Thank you so much!! Hmmmm gem-like intensity??? hmmm i like those words!!.. hugs you!
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
You've penned a VERY GOOD poem.
It has rhyme.
The words come together and form something great.
I especially like the question: 'Can sun drenched blossoms
of sweet perfumes
refuse morning's allure?'- It gives the reader something to think about.
My favorite part: 'Blue oceans know
hearts must bestow'
Lovely artwork: The image shown supports the poem. The background goes well with the art and color of font chosen. I love the color blue.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Love Poem.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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You've penned a VERY GOOD poem.
It has rhyme.
The words come together and form something great.
I especially like the question: 'Can sun drenched blossoms
of sweet perfumes
refuse morning's allure?'- It gives the reader something to think about.
My favorite part: 'Blue oceans know
hearts must bestow'
Lovely artwork: The image shown supports the poem. The background goes well with the art and color of font chosen. I love the color blue.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Love Poem.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 22-May-2017
reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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Thanks Nikki!! great review!! thank you for taking the time to read and review!! I so appreciate it!!
Comment from KyColonel Randal
Thank you for sharing. This poem is well-written and nicely presented. The combination of graphic, color, and font showcase the poem quite well. This poem should do quite well in the "love poem poetry contest." Good luck with your contest entry!
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reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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Thank you for sharing. This poem is well-written and nicely presented. The combination of graphic, color, and font showcase the poem quite well. This poem should do quite well in the "love poem poetry contest." Good luck with your contest entry!
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Comment Written 22-May-2017
reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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Aw thank you for taking the time to read and review!!! I do appreciate it! :-))))
Comment from DR DIP
beautiful!simply beautiful Susan Your poem flows beautifully through. You are the master of the romantic word! (or is that mistress for political correctness? lol)
This is a wonderful entry in the love poem competition. You are a shoe in.
If you win I am sending you a huge deep passionate kiss if you don't I'll send it anyway haha
xxdip
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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beautiful!simply beautiful Susan Your poem flows beautifully through. You are the master of the romantic word! (or is that mistress for political correctness? lol)
This is a wonderful entry in the love poem competition. You are a shoe in.
If you win I am sending you a huge deep passionate kiss if you don't I'll send it anyway haha
xxdip
Comment Written 22-May-2017
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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OH MY GOODNESS!! this review is sweeter then the poem!!!!! Thank you dear Dipster!!.....No master though, just an impossible heart. :-))
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impossible heart..I think you gave me the impetus for my poem impossible heart with this wonderful expression do you remember it?
xdip
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of course I do!!!!
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i read every singlr one of your poems...just been behind with reviews...i would never miss yours:-)))
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not since the day i found you :-)
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"not since the day I found you"..there's a poem in that
xdip
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Hmmmmmm got me thinking!!
Comment from Mastery
A brilliant and beautiful poem here, Susan. Your rhymes are superb and the meter is perfect. The subject matter speaks for itself due to your creative mind. Blessings my friend. good job. Bob
ps. You were reading my book for the longest time, I thought I should let you know you missed the epilogue which explains a lot about what happened to the characters when all was siad and done. sorry it was paying 1.20 but nothing now. (:
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reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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A brilliant and beautiful poem here, Susan. Your rhymes are superb and the meter is perfect. The subject matter speaks for itself due to your creative mind. Blessings my friend. good job. Bob
ps. You were reading my book for the longest time, I thought I should let you know you missed the epilogue which explains a lot about what happened to the characters when all was siad and done. sorry it was paying 1.20 but nothing now. (:
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Comment Written 22-May-2017
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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Oh Bob!! Shame on me...I've been so busy!! BUT I DID read it!!!...trying to come up with a perfect review!! I LOVED THE STORY!!!!..I think it covered every single emotion I have!!!..I'll send you more in a pm