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Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi Bill; I love that you are using Trump and President as opposites. It is a bold move, but very inspired.
Your poem works on many levels; the antonyms and the building of your case with the middle lines. You drew in the terms most associated with our backwards leader - ego and 'fake news.'
well done and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Hi Bill; I love that you are using Trump and President as opposites. It is a bold move, but very inspired.
Your poem works on many levels; the antonyms and the building of your case with the middle lines. You drew in the terms most associated with our backwards leader - ego and 'fake news.'
well done and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thanks, Patty. I feel like I'm taking crazy pills all the time.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Bill. This is definitely a strange Antonym piece of writing but I can not say that I don't agree with it completely and the fact that we are talking the Trumpster here just makes it true. Good luck with this beauty. xoxo Kiwi
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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Hi Bill. This is definitely a strange Antonym piece of writing but I can not say that I don't agree with it completely and the fact that we are talking the Trumpster here just makes it true. Good luck with this beauty. xoxo Kiwi
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Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thanks, Kiwi. for giving this a look. I just noticed this contest was up at midnight so I threw this in. Trump could probably organize a kegger, but as president he's a joke that's not funny.