The Piper
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Comment from Brett Matthew West
Storyline contains enough action to move the tale along.
Several different directions you could travel this accounting in from this point forward.
Dialogue adds another dimension of interest to the story.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017
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Storyline contains enough action to move the tale along.
Several different directions you could travel this accounting in from this point forward.
Dialogue adds another dimension of interest to the story.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017
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Thank you for you kind review.
Comment from Thal1959
I recall reading some earlier installments on this story, but only vaguely - its been some time. So it was difficult to keep the storyline in context. But I remember some of the characters and the general storyline, and I remember commenting on an earlier chapter I had a little difficulty keeping names and races separated. Anyway, the writing is fine, no errors or need to rewrite anything. The story itself is fairly interesting.
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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017
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I recall reading some earlier installments on this story, but only vaguely - its been some time. So it was difficult to keep the storyline in context. But I remember some of the characters and the general storyline, and I remember commenting on an earlier chapter I had a little difficulty keeping names and races separated. Anyway, the writing is fine, no errors or need to rewrite anything. The story itself is fairly interesting.
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Comment Written 29-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017
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Thank you for stopping in to read and review.
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You're welcome - it was my pleasure.
Comment from LaRosa
Redd Leif is definitely a 'story, or tale, spinner'. He could keep even a non-believer on the edge of his seat. His timing is impeccable. His descriptive powers are awesome.
I'm beginning to wonder what the truth is about Redd Leif. What possible lies has Piper been told?
Great story.
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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017
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Redd Leif is definitely a 'story, or tale, spinner'. He could keep even a non-believer on the edge of his seat. His timing is impeccable. His descriptive powers are awesome.
I'm beginning to wonder what the truth is about Redd Leif. What possible lies has Piper been told?
Great story.
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Comment Written 29-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the kind comments and encouragement. I appreciate you continuing to follow the story.