Dr. Howler's Nightmares
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Comment from beizanten
An interesting and intriguing intro in paragraph one, two and three, it make me want to read this. Great describtion of the setting. The thrilling mood flow well and the character is believable. I love this story it totally deserve 6 star.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2017
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An interesting and intriguing intro in paragraph one, two and three, it make me want to read this. Great describtion of the setting. The thrilling mood flow well and the character is believable. I love this story it totally deserve 6 star.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this posting.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
Also appreciate the six stars!
Comment from Rasmine
Brett,
You outdid yourself! This is really good. It reminds me of the R.L. Stein's horror story TV show for kids. Did you enter Dean Kuch's contest? Dr. Howler makes a good host.
TC
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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2017
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Brett,
You outdid yourself! This is really good. It reminds me of the R.L. Stein's horror story TV show for kids. Did you enter Dean Kuch's contest? Dr. Howler makes a good host.
TC
Nome
Comment Written 22-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2017
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No, I did not enter Dean's contest.
Glad you enjoyed this Nightmare. As I said, it has been a while since Doctor Howler appeared on the scene.
But, his Nightmares have always been popular here on FanStory.
So, who knows when he may appear again.
Comment from Sankey
My first time with these. I thought the interloper had the knife not the teen? Loved the picture you chose for this. Only one small suggestion. Pick which you like.The door [re]closed OR
The door re(-)closed
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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2017
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My first time with these. I thought the interloper had the knife not the teen? Loved the picture you chose for this. Only one small suggestion. Pick which you like.The door [re]closed OR
The door re(-)closed
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2017
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In the beginning of the story he did. That picture, and the contest listing for stuck on a elevator, gave me the idea for this Nightmare.
Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I think pled should be pleaded.
wow yes you got me, I expected the man to be a serial killer in wolfs clothing going with Tommy to see grandma. Nicely done
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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2017
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I think pled should be pleaded.
wow yes you got me, I expected the man to be a serial killer in wolfs clothing going with Tommy to see grandma. Nicely done
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2017
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I had it that way, but changed it. I believe you are correct.
Always appreciate your comments, support, reviews, and catches.
