Dr. Howler's Nightmares
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Abortion"A collection of most unusual bedtime stories
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Comment from apky
I must confess this wasn't quite as grabbing as I'd hoped.
Indeed a lot remain in the shadows that I wasn't able to get into.
But, this time something was different. Securely fastened together, David heard what he thought was the whir of a vacuum aspiration machine being turned on. It grabbed him and squeezed tighter and tighter. Slowly, he felt himself being constricted and drawn inside Mariah's body. ~ after reading this I was as lost as the ark.
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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
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I must confess this wasn't quite as grabbing as I'd hoped.
Indeed a lot remain in the shadows that I wasn't able to get into.
But, this time something was different. Securely fastened together, David heard what he thought was the whir of a vacuum aspiration machine being turned on. It grabbed him and squeezed tighter and tighter. Slowly, he felt himself being constricted and drawn inside Mariah's body. ~ after reading this I was as lost as the ark.
This is my personal take, therefore subjective.
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Comment Written 29-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this Nightmare.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
Comment from Heather Knight
Interesting story, I didn't expect the peculiar ending...
Although I have enjoyed reading it myself, I would say it's definitely not for kids.
Thanks for sharing your creative post.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
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Interesting story, I didn't expect the peculiar ending...
Although I have enjoyed reading it myself, I would say it's definitely not for kids.
Thanks for sharing your creative post.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this Nightmare.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
Comment from Sankey
Yuck! What a story. Dunno where she had the vacuum cleaner, not in her sex spot I presume? Good work and gory as ever. No spags as far as I can tell. Worth the read?
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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
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Yuck! What a story. Dunno where she had the vacuum cleaner, not in her sex spot I presume? Good work and gory as ever. No spags as far as I can tell. Worth the read?
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Comment Written 29-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this Nightmare.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
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Have finished the 4 Chapter saga of my wife's almost 3 months in hospital if you want to check them out.
