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Comment from lyenochka
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LOL! Superbly done, Bill! I'm definitely not holding my breath. But I still don't even understand what they are reforming. Can't they make it something really simple so I can figure out the taxes without using a complicated computer program?

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
    Thanks, lyenochka. The 'tax reform' will essentially make Trump hundreds of millions since his 500 'pay through' companies will get a 50% tax cut, along with all the businesses now holding money offshore to keep from paying their share of income tax. Middle income folks will get a taste to keep them quiet.
Comment from Mimi Linny
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Short, sweet and to the point! Cute 6 word poetry piece! Loved the rhyme. Photo is a great one, too! Much luck in the contest! Nicely done!

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
    Thanks, Mimi
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Bill, yeah, you can't trust the taxman let alone the reforms. You said it all in this six word poem. Not an easy thing to do. Good luck in the contest. All the best, Ulla:))

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
    Thanks, Ulla. How are the tax laws where you are now?
reply by Ulla on 13-Nov-2017
    Well, to be honest, I don't pay tax here in Spain, but in Denmark where I receive my pensions. I don't trust the taxman wherever he is. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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Well done. You've said it all in six little words. So painfully true, your prediction.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
    Thanks, Sharon
Comment from Mustang Patty
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excellent presentation and words to describe the 'tax reform.' Now, if you were in the top 1%, you would see green raining down. This is going to be an interesting tax season; GLAD I do not do personal taxes anymore!

~patty~

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
    Thanks, PattyThanks
Comment from Hopefully oppressed
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Are you one of those sceptics of the government? Did you actually learn from history? I'll bet you think all these politicians are only interested in reelection.?. I'll bet you think for yourself...huh

seriously note.... it made me feel like I am not the only one that distrust the government and media.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
    Thanks, HO
Comment from zekeziemann
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Great poem. Simple and direct. I just hope you are wrong in your prediction, but until we drain the swamp you may be correct.


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 Comment Written 13-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
    Thanks, zeke
Comment from fastdigits
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A great choice of art work for this humorous six word poem if only it wasn't so tragic a truth.
well done and good luck

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 Comment Written 13-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
    Thanks, fd