Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Exceptional

I must get that book! This write made me laugh, it is so well rhymed and entertaining and clever and you hit the spot for me, a well deserved six, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018

Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment, and the lovely stars, Dolly. I'm very glad you got a chuckle out of it :) Craig

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is so cute. Yes, keep the mouth shut and put a smile on the face. Be grateful for the little things before they get to be big things. Not so easy sometimes. Love the word recumbentibus. It's a fun one. Your poem is humorous with good rhyming, story line and word choices. Marilyn

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018

Thanks for the lovely comments, Marilyn. Some of us are capable of learning - you can recognise us by the lack of lumps and bruises :) Much appreciated - Craig

reply by BeasPeas on 06-Jan-2018

LOL! Keep your cranium intact!

Comment from oliver818

Excellent

This is a funny poem, that foolish husband should know better. I am very interested in this "cabinet of linguistic curiosities" you mentioned in your notes, the words you are getting from it are quite amazing. This is the second poem I've read by you using a fascinating word. Thanks for sharing this and have a really good day

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018

In response to your interest, I checked - the book is available in both hardcopy and electronic form from Amazon - and it's not too expensive. Thanks for the generous comments :) Craig

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Craig, This is a really cute and humorous poem you have penned. You used very cute descriptive wording and great imagery from your words! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018

Thanks, Teri. I'm glad you liked it - much appreciation, Craig

reply by Teri7 on 06-Jan-2018

you are so welcome my friend! It was really cute and a joy to read!

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

So good. I love your new word and the humorous poem is a hoot - definition, ... very funny. Haha. The writing was well done and flowed well. Thanks for sharing this one with us.

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 Comment Written 06-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018

Thanks for the kind words, glad you enjoyed. Much appreciated - Craig

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

A nice tale with a good moral told, right use of the word of today, man has to be grateful, well said and well written, an orderly paying tribute, a poem smoothly read. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 06-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018

Thanks for reviewing, and for the kind comments. Craig