Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Awaits"Assorted poetry
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Comment from BeasPeas
This little poem is illustrated well and the words of your piece work with it. Things work out the way they're supposed to. All the best in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
This little poem is illustrated well and the words of your piece work with it. Things work out the way they're supposed to. All the best in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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Thanks, Marilyn
Comment from nomi338
Directly from the holiest and most trustworthy book ever written, God's Holy Bible, is the promise that He will never end mankind's existence upon the earth. True, he is going to evict quite a few: Crooked preachers, money grubbing politicians, crooked cops, unrepentant sinner of every sort. Those who remain will not be saints necessarily, but they will be people willing to learn how to do the right thing namely live by God's rules and standards.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
Directly from the holiest and most trustworthy book ever written, God's Holy Bible, is the promise that He will never end mankind's existence upon the earth. True, he is going to evict quite a few: Crooked preachers, money grubbing politicians, crooked cops, unrepentant sinner of every sort. Those who remain will not be saints necessarily, but they will be people willing to learn how to do the right thing namely live by God's rules and standards.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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Thanks, nomi, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent post delineating your faith, Bill. Farther along we'll know all about it, at least that's the hope. Your artwork choice is definitely filled with all the world's a stage too!
Great job friend, Bill.
Gloria
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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
Excellent post delineating your faith, Bill. Farther along we'll know all about it, at least that's the hope. Your artwork choice is definitely filled with all the world's a stage too!
Great job friend, Bill.
Gloria
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Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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Thanks, Gloria, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Truthfully I do not know what you are referring to unless it's this Korea and States or should we say Trump issues however, it is wonderful to see you competing and writing a variety of stuff. Well done. :) Kiwi
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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
Truthfully I do not know what you are referring to unless it's this Korea and States or should we say Trump issues however, it is wonderful to see you competing and writing a variety of stuff. Well done. :) Kiwi
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Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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Thanks, kiwi, for the kin$ r3view. Bill