Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Very clever, dare I say cute to a guy? LOL! Well, I liked it. This antimetabole is great fun. I hope poets here see it and try it out for themselves. I'm even tempted, but I swore off poetry for a few years. :)

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 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018

I definitely think you should break your resolution, and give it a go. Thanks for the lovely review, Phyllis. I haven't been called "cute" in about 80 years - so I'll take it! ;-) Craig

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Another clever write with a new word for me to learn, your book is coming in handy! I liked the reference to the going getting roughs and the tough get going as it reminded me of the song! Your poem flows beautifully and I enjoyed every word, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018

Thank you so much, Dolly, for the kind review. I'm very grateful for the support :) Craig