Comment from Samilla

Good

Whimsical and fun. I found myself in her position, poised on the precarious ice with disastrous results. Limmericks can be devilishly difficult, as their cadence is most important for a clean flow.

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 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

Thank you.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

This is a cute poem in which you incorporate your word icelegs very well.
Nicely written and jaunty.
Well done and thank you for sharing this one.
Sharon

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

Thanks for reviewing, Sharon. Much appreciated - Craig

Comment from James H. Oldfield

Excellent

Great job, and a scenario I'm more acquainted with seeing from the other point of view :)

Nothing to suggest changing, a very solid write.

Great job, and take care.

-James

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

Thanks James. Much appreciated - Craig

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

What a cute and enjoyable poem. The limerick was well-constructed and had the right lilt and cadence. Thanks for sharing this with us. Well done. Regards.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

Thank you for the kind comments, Sugarray - Craig

Comment from sanejane

Excellent

Ha! That's why I never go skating.
I like a good limerick, and that's what this is, though I'm not sure why she looks so pleased with herself in the image...

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

Maybe because she didn't break anything? I always thought that was a bonus when I went skating. Many thanks, Craig

reply by sanejane on 23-Jan-2018

Good answer!

Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

CUTE SO DARLING. Is girl ice skater practicing for the Olympics, or what? Perhaps, with lots more practice she can skate and turn twirls and spins in the air. Good thing that ice is frozen solid. Someone you know--your child? WELL WRITTEN liberty justice

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 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

No, just a picture off the 'net. Many thanks for the kind review. Craig

reply by Liberty Justice on 23-Jan-2018

You're so welcome. Good luck to you, if you are in a contest, and thanks for supporting me, today. liberty justice