Paternity test.
A joyful moment.15 total reviews
Comment from Debbie Pope
I love these short poems, seeing what people can create in so few syllables. Yours is exceptional. You did not need any more words to portray your situation. Great job.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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I love these short poems, seeing what people can create in so few syllables. Yours is exceptional. You did not need any more words to portray your situation. Great job.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from mvbrooks
Powerful message enhanced by the picture that clearly shows a father's pride in looking at a recently born child. Difficult to capture a whole story in such few words--well done.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Powerful message enhanced by the picture that clearly shows a father's pride in looking at a recently born child. Difficult to capture a whole story in such few words--well done.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from Fabiha_N
This is a beautiful poem! I can't really imagine how much of a joyous moment it would be when you become a mother/father. I guess I will have to wait until I get to that stage! Anyway, this does sound like such a special moment, and the picture's really cute too!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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This is a beautiful poem! I can't really imagine how much of a joyous moment it would be when you become a mother/father. I guess I will have to wait until I get to that stage! Anyway, this does sound like such a special moment, and the picture's really cute too!
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
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Many thanks for your comments
Comment from Dumbledor
''Joy'' what a nice positive end to this short lanturne. Well presented, and framed with a nice photograph relevant to the verse..telling all. ''I'm the father''
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''Joy'' what a nice positive end to this short lanturne. Well presented, and framed with a nice photograph relevant to the verse..telling all. ''I'm the father''
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Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
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Thank you
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
It is good to see you go the route of fathers being happy knowing they are going to be fathers. A lotof them get a bad rap as being the bad guy
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It is good to see you go the route of fathers being happy knowing they are going to be fathers. A lotof them get a bad rap as being the bad guy
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Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
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Many thanks.