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A collection of poems showcasing unusual words
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Gloria ....
Such a beautiful wish for a house that is a home, Craig. Your word choices for the day and charmingly soft and chimerical. Wonderful cadence and rhymes throughout and the ending is pitch perfect.
Best wishes to you in the contest. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
Thanks so much, Gloria. I really appreciate the kind comments, the wonderful rating, and the good wishes. Craig
Comment from
frierajac
I can nearly see how a problem if one is lucky would be chimerical..A person would want it to escape. Chimera is something of an illusion one pursues. The word,
limerance I haven't run across before. So, this peaceful house is blessed and
over the top with romantic infatuation.
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Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
You say that like it's a bad thing. Thanks for the review :) Craig
reply by frierajac on 14-Feb-2018
over the top is more on the complementary side.
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