A Potpourri of Poetic Curiosities
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Comment from Ricky1024
The Diary was an Acrostic Poem rich in Theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Dr Ricky 1024.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
The Diary was an Acrostic Poem rich in Theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thanks very much. Craig
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A great acrostic about keeping a diary. I kept a diary during both the pregnancies of my two babies, the diary charted my feelings everyday as the babies were growing until their birth and my joy at seeing their faces, sadly with many house moves I no longer have the diaries, but I remember the entries to this day, My favourite line is "Each precious moment struggle, joy and strife", a joy to read, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
A great acrostic about keeping a diary. I kept a diary during both the pregnancies of my two babies, the diary charted my feelings everyday as the babies were growing until their birth and my joy at seeing their faces, sadly with many house moves I no longer have the diaries, but I remember the entries to this day, My favourite line is "Each precious moment struggle, joy and strife", a joy to read, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thanks very much for the lovely review, Dolly, and for sharing the happiness you got from recording your pregnancies. Much appreciated, Craig.
Comment from Gloria ....
Ha, well now we're just going to have to take your word for it. If there's no diary as evidence. lol. Great job Craig. The acrostic is turning out to be a good form for those "difficult" words in the family cabinet of linguistic curiosities.
Great job as per your signature you. :)
Gloria
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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
Ha, well now we're just going to have to take your word for it. If there's no diary as evidence. lol. Great job Craig. The acrostic is turning out to be a good form for those "difficult" words in the family cabinet of linguistic curiosities.
Great job as per your signature you. :)
Gloria
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Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Or days when I'm just too lazy (or sidetracked) to think too hard !
Thanks very much, Gloria - much appreciated, as always :)