Comment from Trudi Perkins

Excellent

This is an interesting poem indeed. I really enjoyed this poem very much. Thanks for sharing your craft with us and I look forward to reading more of your writings. Thanks again.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018

Thanks very much, Trudi. I'm grateful for the very kind words :) Cheers, Craig

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a clever write with all the trademarks in red and today's word is anepronym. I liked the 'Limerick' style verses which gave the poem bounce, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018

Thanks very much, Dolly, so glad you enjoyed. Much appreciated - Craig

Comment from Sherman541

Excellent

Funny ! Great rhyming and great choice of words. It is fun to just be silly every now and then use the odd words to make it happen. I like the story too. I love Dr. Seuss and silly sense of humor too. Sherman541

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 Comment Written 27-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018

Thanks very much for the great review :) Humour is something we all need a great deal of at the moment, I think. Cheers, Craig

reply by Sherman541 on 27-Feb-2018

You are so welcome! Yes, we sure do humor is something that does not seem to come often. Cheers to you !!

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Goood job using those brandname words. I like how you made every other line have an internal rhyme, as if you had two shorter lines instead of one long one.

"Why such a big issue?"
She reached for a tissue,
her Kleenex all crumpled and soggy;
"You're making my head spin,
I need to take Aspirin,
my thinking's all muddled and foggy".

This is obviously more work, and it's worth it. :)

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 Comment Written 27-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018

Thanks for the great review. One of my favourite poets (The Banjo) used this form a bit, as did Robert Service (though I think he probably pinched it from The Banjo). I like it a lot, and yes, I don't think there's any difference if it's written the way you've given :)

Cheers,
Craig