A Potpourri of Poetic Curiosities
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Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Seems like you're on a roll for exotic writings now Richard but I like the color red and I like the way you kept it for the imagination to wonder and go into a fantasy. I love the wording I love the style of font and the picture which is very decent. Wha
With the world in which we live in now anything goes but I appreciate you just leaving just enough exposure to make it a non nudity pic. It's a good poem good picture selection and I see where you're headed too. You be blessed Richard.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Seems like you're on a roll for exotic writings now Richard but I like the color red and I like the way you kept it for the imagination to wonder and go into a fantasy. I love the wording I love the style of font and the picture which is very decent. Wha
With the world in which we live in now anything goes but I appreciate you just leaving just enough exposure to make it a non nudity pic. It's a good poem good picture selection and I see where you're headed too. You be blessed Richard.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Thanks very much for the very kind review, Mary. In actual fact, the picture goes quite a bit further than the original striptease, which ended with the lady in a nightgown. How times have changed! Much appreciated - Craig
Comment from beizanten
A very good and sensual poetry. A very sexy and beautiful picture. It must hard to do this type of poetry but you had done great. Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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A very good and sensual poetry. A very sexy and beautiful picture. It must hard to do this type of poetry but you had done great. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Thank you for the kind comments. Much appreciated - Craig
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem describes the action and the reaction of the striptease. It is true that things like this start out tame and get wilder through the years.
There is a smooth flow to these rhyming couplets used to encapsulate the meaning of your word of the day.
You chose a very appropriate piece of artwork for illustration.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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This poem describes the action and the reaction of the striptease. It is true that things like this start out tame and get wilder through the years.
There is a smooth flow to these rhyming couplets used to encapsulate the meaning of your word of the day.
You chose a very appropriate piece of artwork for illustration.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Thanks very much for the kind remarks. Much appreciated - Craig
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My pleasure.
Joan
Comment from tfawcus
A case of the serpent shedding her skin. Very tempting. Talking of serpents, I once saw a striptease show in Cyprus in which - no, perhaps I'd be wiser not to go into that!
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A case of the serpent shedding her skin. Very tempting. Talking of serpents, I once saw a striptease show in Cyprus in which - no, perhaps I'd be wiser not to go into that!
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Haha, well if you'd said Thailand, I'd be very worried! Thanks, Tony.