Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

when numbnuts collide...
Rocket Man meets Rocket Mouth
a patt - say goodbye...
Funny and clever. This is a smart write I enjoyed very much well done kindest regards Meia x

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018

Thanks, Meia, for the kind review. Comments much appreciated - Craig

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Life continues on through the years as time moves faster. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.

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 Comment Written 24-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018

Thanks very much for the kind review - Craig

reply by c_lucas on 24-Mar-2018

You're welcome, Craig. Charlie

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Scary to think that the fate of the world is now held in the slippery skins of a pair of bananas, in pyjamas.
I've never hear of patt before. There are some interesting definitions in the various Google dictionaries. I think that the one I liked best was Party All The Time. Good advice under the circumstances.

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 Comment Written 24-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018

Haha, yes, eat, drink and be merry...

Thanks for the fun (and perceptive) review, Tony - Craig