Perennials of War
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Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Shana tilted her head. "What are you saying?" "Mr. Sharp, we're preparing to land. It could be a rough one. The Texas wind is rearing its ugly head. Gusts are up to fifty-five miles per hour." The pilot laughed...Awesome as always Barbara, this is truly fantastic, I wish I had your talent for prose you make your characthers seemso real...all my love and best wishes Meia x
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Shana tilted her head. "What are you saying?" "Mr. Sharp, we're preparing to land. It could be a rough one. The Texas wind is rearing its ugly head. Gusts are up to fifty-five miles per hour." The pilot laughed...Awesome as always Barbara, this is truly fantastic, I wish I had your talent for prose you make your characthers seemso real...all my love and best wishes Meia x
Comment Written 10-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from Artasylum
Hey Barbara.Wilkey... the skullduggery continues. the painting that everyone seems to want is thrusting chaos into Shana's life and unfortunately her family is holding the bag. thanks for the Fun read and looking forward. yours, diana
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Hey Barbara.Wilkey... the skullduggery continues. the painting that everyone seems to want is thrusting chaos into Shana's life and unfortunately her family is holding the bag. thanks for the Fun read and looking forward. yours, diana
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mbroyles2
I don't care what they say, having your pilot laugh when he's getting ready to land a plane can't be good.
It looks like Drew is going to open up about his feelings for Shana, let's see how she reacts.
Really like this story!
Michael
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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I don't care what they say, having your pilot laugh when he's getting ready to land a plane can't be good.
It looks like Drew is going to open up about his feelings for Shana, let's see how she reacts.
Really like this story!
Michael
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Thank you for the generous review.
Comment from Rasmine
Hello, Barbara, :)
I have a suggestion. Maybe you could write from the other perspective. What I mean is from the Russians.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Nome
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Hello, Barbara, :)
I have a suggestion. Maybe you could write from the other perspective. What I mean is from the Russians.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Nome
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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LOL I could try. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from meeshu
very interesting story, Barbara. a real personal story with international intrigue.
the best part for me is this painting haunting in the background. like Hitchcock's McGuffin.........meeshu
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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very interesting story, Barbara. a real personal story with international intrigue.
the best part for me is this painting haunting in the background. like Hitchcock's McGuffin.........meeshu
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm glad to see some of Anderson's feeling are being expressed, and I'm betting that soon, Shana won't be able to hide her's anymore. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter. :-)
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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I'm glad to see some of Anderson's feeling are being expressed, and I'm betting that soon, Shana won't be able to hide her's anymore. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter. :-)
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Shana is really guarded and afraid. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sasha
I was waiting to hear that the Russians had put a hit out on Anderson. I am a bit surprised that his brother argued a little when Anderson instructed him to beef up security. The feelings between Anderson and Shana are beginning to show and I am thrilled. I know a decision to be with him will not be an easy one for Shana but with each chapter you can tell she is showing her feeling a bit more. Nice work with this one. It is starting to get exciting and scary too.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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I was waiting to hear that the Russians had put a hit out on Anderson. I am a bit surprised that his brother argued a little when Anderson instructed him to beef up security. The feelings between Anderson and Shana are beginning to show and I am thrilled. I know a decision to be with him will not be an easy one for Shana but with each chapter you can tell she is showing her feeling a bit more. Nice work with this one. It is starting to get exciting and scary too.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Thank you for the generous review.
Comment from judiverse
Always problems. Now it looks like there's going to be some turbulence as they're on their way to Texas. With the hit out on Shana and Anderson, he's having to beef up security. Even in Texas. Brother Zachery is heard from. Poor Shana regrets what has happened--all because of the painting which she has said she is willing to give up just to get rid of the threat from the Russians. Anderson doesn't have any regrets in getting involved in trying to help Shana. I have a feeling they will be able to reconcile their differences about their faiths. Great story. judi
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Always problems. Now it looks like there's going to be some turbulence as they're on their way to Texas. With the hit out on Shana and Anderson, he's having to beef up security. Even in Texas. Brother Zachery is heard from. Poor Shana regrets what has happened--all because of the painting which she has said she is willing to give up just to get rid of the threat from the Russians. Anderson doesn't have any regrets in getting involved in trying to help Shana. I have a feeling they will be able to reconcile their differences about their faiths. Great story. judi
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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I sure hope so. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from apky
Apart from the little glitches I point out below, this is another riveting chapter that flowed naturall and rang true. Thr story is progressing as it should. I look forward to what is awaiting Shana and Anderson in Texas with his family.
You have to be tired. ~ Barbara, I think what you mean here is: You must be tired.
"You have to be tired." is sort of a command or request for her to be tired.
My business issues are (delete-of) none of your concern.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Apart from the little glitches I point out below, this is another riveting chapter that flowed naturall and rang true. Thr story is progressing as it should. I look forward to what is awaiting Shana and Anderson in Texas with his family.
You have to be tired. ~ Barbara, I think what you mean here is: You must be tired.
"You have to be tired." is sort of a command or request for her to be tired.
My business issues are (delete-of) none of your concern.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Thank you and I appreciate your help. I keep reading over the tired sentence and knew something was wrong but couldn't put my finger on it. As soon as you pointed it out, I said, "Yep, that's it."
Comment from royowen
The love story is delightfully expanding to accommodate a newness of spirit Barbara, (I loved the sheer luxury of, what so probably a lear jet. While Shana ponders what Drew means by enriching his life. Then the warning they're going to land with high winds on the agenda, well done, good episodic fodder. Blessings, Roy
Typo : I wish i('d) never got in your car
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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The love story is delightfully expanding to accommodate a newness of spirit Barbara, (I loved the sheer luxury of, what so probably a lear jet. While Shana ponders what Drew means by enriching his life. Then the warning they're going to land with high winds on the agenda, well done, good episodic fodder. Blessings, Roy
Typo : I wish i('d) never got in your car
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Thank you for the kind review. I'll check that area.
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Most welcome