Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks the moment when two worlds collide, irresistible force to each one and there is clash as powerful as an earthquake; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018

Thanks very much for the kind review - Craig

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

This is a good entry for the contest. New word learned. Last was pisgah. I guess only an elephant can move another elephant. I am so glad that elephants are immune to rhinos, but sad they are not also immune from man. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018

Thanks for the great comments, Pam. Yes, it is a shame. And a week or two ago we successfully wiped out a whole species of rhino (northern white). Aren't humans just peachy?

Comment from mvbrooks

Excellent

This would be a great poem for an SAT class --love the use of "big words" for a small poem. Fun, clever, great image to reinforce the message. Good luck.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018

Thanks very much for the good wishes and the kind comments. Craig

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

I am learning a lot from your book A Potpourri of Poetic Curiosities - thank you very much....certainly new words - 'terremotive' - although I'm not sure I will be using that word much in a sentence. I cannot find it in my word dictionary but I'll take your word for it ;-) Good entry for the 5-7-5 contest. Best of luck ~DD

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 Comment Written 18-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018

Google works, too ;-)

Thanks so much for the great comments and the good wishes, DD. Cheers - Craig

reply by PoemsOfDD on 18-Apr-2018

I trust you Craig...my dictionary is basic so google is a good tip..thanks. ~DD

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the '5-7-5 Poetry' writing prompt.
Your short verse tells of large objects colliding very well.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

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 Comment Written 18-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018

Thanks very much, Sharon, for the kind remarks and good wishes. Craig