Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

This is a very profound acrostic poem and I agree with every single word of it. Very cleverly written. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes Jen.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018

Thanks very much, Jen - much appreciated, Craig

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

good acrostic poem. CD. as to the subject matter, everybody knows that already (SHEEESH, so G.H.). kidding. thanks for the info, I love word origins and such.......meeshu

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 Comment Written 23-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018

Thanks very much for another thoughtful and generous review, meeshu. Much appreciated - Craig

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Old news. Good Heart. But, don't you know that your compassion comes from God?

Everything good we do comes from God. Everything bad? Those are our sins and we still need God to forgive us. Got it? Man has no free will. GH stands for God's Heathens. You and I are members of that club. Thank you for sharing

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 Comment Written 23-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018

God's Heathens sounds like some weird Christian motorcycle gang. It reminds me a bit of how the "Children of God" back in the 70s used to describe themselves as "hookers for Christ". Many thanks, Pam - cheers, Craig

Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Exceptional

Wow!
Two letters can, to my amazement, produce a poem quite profound.
Congratulations on this accomplishment.
The actual poem is written with clarity of meaning and quite a deep message.
:-) Shirley

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018

Thank you very much for the wonderful comments and the delightful rating, Shirley. I'm most grateful for both. Craig