Comment from ~Dovey

Exceptional

Hi Craig -

I really enjoyed the internal cross rhyme and end rhymes in this piece. The message is grand. Loved it!!

You have done a fantastic job with this one!

Kim

 Comment Written 17-May-2018

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reply by the author on 17-May-2018

Thanks so much, Kim, for the lovely comments AND the exceptional rating. I'm so glad you enjoyed :) Craig

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

What a fancy word for prize-giving. I was hoping you'd use fanstory premiation as a focus for all of us who want to win a prize at times. Yours is a very civil attitude which I admire but I still think we need salvation and sometimes it's just from pride.

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 Comment Written 17-May-2018

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reply by the author on 17-May-2018

Perhaps the pride lies in those who think they enjoy special privileges? It could be said the "ultimate reward" is only a secondary subject of besument, ranking somewhere behind the awarding of prizes in FanStory contests... but I'd never say such a thing, I might never win another! :)

reply by lyenochka on 17-May-2018

:) Have a good night, Craig.

reply by the author on 17-May-2018

Night, Helen :)

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

a well written testimonial poem, CD. an excellent biblical interpretation. as you point out in your piece, there are many pretenders out there. the answer is within..........meeshu

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 Comment Written 17-May-2018

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reply by the author on 17-May-2018

Thanks for the kind words, meeshu. Much appreciated - Craig