Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hello, this is a bit funny, I enjoyed the image of two TV's and two different dinners, LOL. I liked your verse and the author notes. Another fine word you've chosen. I saw no errors and I just want to say that whoever did that girls' makeup, I want their number. Fabulous eyes. Thanks for sharing your writing, which I would recommend to other readers for review, Ana.

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 Comment Written 03-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018

Thanks very much, Ana, for the fun comments. I'm sorry about the paltry 2 cents - I released it, thinking I had enough to promote, but I was a few cents short, and you got in before I had a chance to earn the extra pennies. Most appreciated - Craig

reply by Alexander Vasa on 03-Jun-2018

I don't mind reviewing for two cents, I like reading and review for a bit of a break from my serious writing, have a great day, Ana.

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

great word, CD, and a great poem. I would go with an iconic brand name product to juxtapose lobster. Top Ramen, Spam, Hot Pockets. more comic Ummph, maybe...........meeshu

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 Comment Written 03-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018

Thanks so much, Meeshu. I agree with you about the brand-name thing, I'll change it if I can think of a suitable choice that fits. I'm sorry about the paltry 2 cents - I released it, thinking I had enough to promote, but I was a few cents short, and you got in before I had a chance to earn the extra pennies. Most grateful - Craig