Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about human behaviour and how we are always on defense against others. Every gesture others make we always think we have to be on guard.

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 Comment Written 27-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018

Thanks very much, Sandra. Your comments are always appreciated. Craig

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is a well worded poem with a great message, Craig. You did a great job with the rhymes & smooth flow while incorporating your obscure word. Your poem's message could be applied to today's world everywhere as it is us against them. Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan

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 Comment Written 27-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018

It certainly is, Jan. But then again, it seems to have been that way since the beginning of civilisation. We're not real quick on the uptake, as a species. Many thanks, Craig