A Potpourri of Poetic Curiosities
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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Wow I am glad I stopped in. I love the way you introduced the word of the day tous using this story and rhyme. Very nicely done as I am a MIB fancier.lol
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Wow I am glad I stopped in. I love the way you introduced the word of the day tous using this story and rhyme. Very nicely done as I am a MIB fancier.lol
Comment Written 09-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Thanks very much, Barb. Good to hear from you. Where is my neuralyzer? Can't have you remembering this discussion :) Cheers, Craig
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I keep mine in a case at my side, very handy.lol
Comment from rama devi
Heard that too - but does not make it true! LOL
Good one, Craig. Great flow and creative rhyming, though the scansion is slightly forced here (but the rhymes are phenomenal):
Now, Roswell hides another truth the public cannot know,
those stories of balloons and weather instruments are bunk.
Crash-landing UFOs were found there in New Mexico,
the buildings there are metres deep in bodies and space junk.
Fun whimsical ending note.
Fun presentation too.
An interesting word of the day,
Best Smiles,
rd
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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Heard that too - but does not make it true! LOL
Good one, Craig. Great flow and creative rhyming, though the scansion is slightly forced here (but the rhymes are phenomenal):
Now, Roswell hides another truth the public cannot know,
those stories of balloons and weather instruments are bunk.
Crash-landing UFOs were found there in New Mexico,
the buildings there are metres deep in bodies and space junk.
Fun whimsical ending note.
Fun presentation too.
An interesting word of the day,
Best Smiles,
rd
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Comment Written 09-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Thanks so much, RD. I was tossing up whether to put in an author note, so readers would know whether I was serious or not. Then I thought, "Where's the fun in that?" ;-) Much appreciated -- Craig
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Comment from Robbie Yates
Bahahahaha. Fantastic poem. I love your use of rhyme and metre. The line, "It's true. I heard it from my mate" is so persuasive - lol. Really cute formatting and great choice of picture.
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Bahahahaha. Fantastic poem. I love your use of rhyme and metre. The line, "It's true. I heard it from my mate" is so persuasive - lol. Really cute formatting and great choice of picture.
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Comment Written 09-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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I decided there was a slight meter issue with that line, so I changed it -- but nothing major :) Thanks for the positive review! Craig