Fanstory, I am There!
A comedy/romance sitcom16 total reviews
Comment from RFL
Absolutely charming? Well, maybe not charming given the warnings for this piece. But definitely fun, creative, and well-done. I really can't imagine anyone topping this one in the contest, but you never know. Or, do you? Best of luck! (But it does take more than luck to win. It does take a least some talent.) Lol. RFL
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Absolutely charming? Well, maybe not charming given the warnings for this piece. But definitely fun, creative, and well-done. I really can't imagine anyone topping this one in the contest, but you never know. Or, do you? Best of luck! (But it does take more than luck to win. It does take a least some talent.) Lol. RFL
Comment Written 30-Jul-2018
Comment from rama devi
Witty satire from double POVS. Very unique and clever. A bit dirty (not my cuppa tea but you did it well!)
You have some inventive rhymes. It also has a bouncy beat.
Excellent originality will make this a strong contender. I think your use of formatting to sculpt cadences works well...and the font play too. your punctuation choices are all very sound. Just one suggestion:
Fanstory(, or :) she lives there!
Good luck!
Warmly,
rd
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Witty satire from double POVS. Very unique and clever. A bit dirty (not my cuppa tea but you did it well!)
You have some inventive rhymes. It also has a bouncy beat.
Excellent originality will make this a strong contender. I think your use of formatting to sculpt cadences works well...and the font play too. your punctuation choices are all very sound. Just one suggestion:
Fanstory(, or :) she lives there!
Good luck!
Warmly,
rd
Comment Written 30-Jul-2018
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Your creativity shines brightly as I read this or these contest entries. I am impressed with how musical your lyrics are. I watched Green Acres and am very familiar with the song. You should so well, but just in case, I wish you the best of luck.
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Your creativity shines brightly as I read this or these contest entries. I am impressed with how musical your lyrics are. I watched Green Acres and am very familiar with the song. You should so well, but just in case, I wish you the best of luck.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2018
Comment from Sasha
Great job with this TV show theme song poem contest entry. I found it very entertaining and quit clever. However, I hated that show and had to leave the room when my parents sat down to watch it. I guess we all have different taste in what we like. Green Acres was not for me. That said, I sincerely wish you all the best in this fun contest.
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Great job with this TV show theme song poem contest entry. I found it very entertaining and quit clever. However, I hated that show and had to leave the room when my parents sat down to watch it. I guess we all have different taste in what we like. Green Acres was not for me. That said, I sincerely wish you all the best in this fun contest.
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Comment Written 30-Jul-2018
Comment from DR DIP
hahaha very good mick a very worthy 6 stars for you my friend. I am sure many people will or could relate to this lol I used to love Green acres. Arnold Ziffel, Mr Haney etc
dip
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hahaha very good mick a very worthy 6 stars for you my friend. I am sure many people will or could relate to this lol I used to love Green acres. Arnold Ziffel, Mr Haney etc
dip
Comment Written 30-Jul-2018
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello Michael, this is fun, a bit of a hoot. Who is that woman in the clip?? That accent. I am not familiar with the song, or the show, but that doesn't stop me appreciating the effort yo have gone to for this entry in the competition. Nicely done and thanks for sharing your poetry. Ana.
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Hello Michael, this is fun, a bit of a hoot. Who is that woman in the clip?? That accent. I am not familiar with the song, or the show, but that doesn't stop me appreciating the effort yo have gone to for this entry in the competition. Nicely done and thanks for sharing your poetry. Ana.
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Comment Written 30-Jul-2018