A Potpourri of Poetic Curiosities
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Comment from Hugh McDowell
Very funny. And jeopard totally new to me. The arrogance and irony of the Dave is very amusing. Excellent pace and rhyming. I wonder in the leopard's name was goliath and he reversed the tale! Hugh
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Very funny. And jeopard totally new to me. The arrogance and irony of the Dave is very amusing. Excellent pace and rhyming. I wonder in the leopard's name was goliath and he reversed the tale! Hugh
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Thanks very much, Hugh. I certainly don't think we could call our leopard friend a Philistine. Cheers, Craig
Comment from BeasPeas
Super limerick using your new word, "jeopard." Written very well and illustrated perfectly with the kitty eating her dinner. Rhyming, cadence, and flow are great. Marilyn
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Super limerick using your new word, "jeopard." Written very well and illustrated perfectly with the kitty eating her dinner. Rhyming, cadence, and flow are great. Marilyn
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Thanks so much, Marilyn. Much appreciated -- Craig
Comment from jusylee72
I have no idea why I like this poem. It is sad and the picture is disturbing, but I do because I guess it speaks of reality and the true word. Thank you for disturbing my mind. Truly, good poem.
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I have no idea why I like this poem. It is sad and the picture is disturbing, but I do because I guess it speaks of reality and the true word. Thank you for disturbing my mind. Truly, good poem.
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Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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I'm sorry if I cause a few unsavory images. Still, your day wasn't nearly as bad as Dave's :) Many thanks for the kind comments, Craig
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Well, anyone stupid enough to take on a leopard is well, stupid. Good job, Craig. Your limerick is in good form. I like how you ended with your word for the day--clever--Dave? not so much. Your picture is a great pairing with your words--unfortunately for dumba** Dave. Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan
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Well, anyone stupid enough to take on a leopard is well, stupid. Good job, Craig. Your limerick is in good form. I like how you ended with your word for the day--clever--Dave? not so much. Your picture is a great pairing with your words--unfortunately for dumba** Dave. Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan
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Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Dave certainly takes out the Darwin award for the month, I would think. Have you heard of those? Many thanks, Jan :) Cheers, Craig
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Oh, well, they were instigated a while ago. Someone wrote a book creating an award for people who, by committing really stupid acts, managed to get themselves killed, thus removing their DNA from the gene pool (hence the name). I have one copy of the book, but I believe it's updated from time time time with new tales of stupidity. I think Dave certainly qualifies.