A Potpourri of Poetic Curiosities
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written thought-provoking poem. We do not know when or why or how it will happen, although many say we are the last generation. All I can say we cannot save our bodies, but we can prepare our souls.
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A very well-written thought-provoking poem. We do not know when or why or how it will happen, although many say we are the last generation. All I can say we cannot save our bodies, but we can prepare our souls.
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Comment Written 01-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018
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Thank, Sandra. Your continued support is much appreciated. Craig
Comment from Gloria ....
Well it could've been worse, Craig. You might not have given us some popcorn, and buttered no less, I mean what difference does it make when we put an end to our existence once and for all.
I still keep hoping we'll wise up before we blow up the joint, or otherwise exhaust all the Earth's resources.
That said, what a cheery poem, and your metre and rhyme was so smooth I barely noticed it was about the end.
Great job and thanks for the beer too!
Gloria
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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018
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Well it could've been worse, Craig. You might not have given us some popcorn, and buttered no less, I mean what difference does it make when we put an end to our existence once and for all.
I still keep hoping we'll wise up before we blow up the joint, or otherwise exhaust all the Earth's resources.
That said, what a cheery poem, and your metre and rhyme was so smooth I barely noticed it was about the end.
Great job and thanks for the beer too!
Gloria
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Comment Written 01-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018
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Many thanks, Gloria. The last minutes would hardly be a time to be hoarding the beer, now would it? Most grateful -- Craig